As The HomePage Says, A Quick Little Mock Verse

It's Only Like 45 Secs...Just Tryin To Get This Audio Shit Down
Pack...The Beat Came With My Version Of Fruity Loops
The Verse Is From My Ep

Master Blaster ~ Master Blaster (Verse #1)

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Feed Back If Any Please

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master blaster that joint was aight i didnt really enjoy the beat but ya lyrics was cool and ish just needed a different beat that wasnt the one it sounded like mix between techno and trance nah mean no disrespect but other than that it was aight

keep ya head up -1-

^^^Thank-You

Makin Beats Is Tough...That One Was Already Done So I
Ran With It

HopeFully I'll Get The Whole Song Finished And Complete

I'll Keep Yaw Updated

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Man, . . . Man , Man , Man . . .

This Was . . . Wow,


Well .... Uhhh .. Word's Can't Really Explain This .. Hmmm ... Well Let's Just Say You Need A Lot Of Work . . .

I Mean .. Wheres The Flow Man? .. Emotion Is Garbage .. Content Was Blah .. Beat Was Fucking Horrible ..

Heres A Tip, Elevate Before You Drop The LP .

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*Hint* *Hint* Mock Verse *Hint* *Hint*

The Beat Was Already Made

The Flow Was Rushed

I Have A Mom, Dad, Brother, And Sister

I Have To Wait For Till A Certain Time To Spit

Blah Whatever

It'll Get Better ~ Don't Worry

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Umm.. Yeah, what Jae said. Having a beat in the background of this was pointless.. Maybe with a better beat and stuff it'll get better.. *shrugs*

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ur voice can go somewhere...omg i still thought u were on the intro then i realized u were rapping haha...WITH TIME U WILL BE GOOD (INSHALLAH)

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it was dope... to a point keep elevatin and lose the beat. ouch!

thanks for the feedback

sounds like my content is on point

but i need new beats

i'll be back with hotness

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LMAO!!! Hey never rep half ass. You know that shit was funny. Take your time kid, this shit ain't easy, especially rappin and producin' at the same time. Anyway, put a sock or somthin on the mic, cause you don't have a spit screen to block your POwerful PEees

i dont like the way you say shit and you change your voice like your asking a question.

like how you said fatality, in the begging that sounds gay,

you also sound like your scared to to rap, why are you so quiet? get into it and spit shit out with some feeling and energy.

dont be afraid to rap in front of your family if you cant rap infront of them you wont be able to rap infront of people in a concert.

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You Hit The Nail On The Head

I Can't Rap In-Front Of My Family...Not The Way I Rap

My Mom -N- Dad Have Been Jesus Freaks For Like 22 Years

If They Find Out Then They Might Pry For Me To Clean Up
And Then That's Hard Work Down The Drain

But My Dad Does Think I'm Eminem Though

more bullshit (feedback if any)

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yea get more into it...sometimes ur soundin like big gay al..i wouldnt notice it if u werent reading rap memorize!!!!!!

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