i realized how much i miss you today
when u left, i swept the tears away
i cried cause it hurt so much inside
i tried to show you emmotion but couldn't provide
when it happend, i was surprised
i didn't even have time to say my goodbye's
you just decided to get up and leave me
i said i was sorry, but didn't belive me
wish i could take back those nasty thing's i said
but i gotta live with them instead
they say that life goes on
but it can't, knowing that your gone

a couple of weeks have past, and now i'm fine
if ya come crawlin back, i'm a have to decline
that was the third time we were together
i've just relized, i can do better
so no more of us ever again, it's the end
but don't worry, i still wannabe your friend
it's up to you, whatever you want to do
friend or not, i'll never forget you
so have a nice life whether i'm in it or not
hope you find another nice guy, to take my spot

i know i'm not the best guy that's out there
but i'm one of the few, that actually cares
so remember what i said, i'm always here for you
no matter what you are going through
i'll always have time for you
always

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good piece...it got across that sort of empty feeling that u get after being dropped...i liked how u werent asking for her back, rather asking fo rher friendship....
Peace

agreement all around, the rhyme's were super ill, it didn't seem like you had to force any of them, good message behind it all too,
peace

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Kind of empty, cool emotions ran through this piece. At times echoing.

Simple in how it was written, yet the depth was most definetly there.

...it was very good for what it was, man...

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