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07-09-03, 01:16 AM
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~s.e.i.n.g.~e.v.i.l.~i.n.~y.o.u.~
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S-ometimes i get trapped in, when im held captive, with the grasp of the devil's advocate...
E-vil thoughts circulatin through the brain, expanding the cerebral, "crossin" "crusification" of pain... I-ts hard to adjust, when u rhyme as a must , untruthful...lost of a trust, caught in a fuss... N-atural ability, to rhyme fluently, but when possesed with the demon, when it all flew into me... G-reatness of darkness, rushin through the veins, entering the brain, releasing a batch of pain... E-xtractive hate, when the wrath decays, in a tragic fate, and release reactive weights, on ur brains debate, wit no side to take... V-eiling all the results, of the sealed "mind" of a "vault", evil spirits overcomin my fault... I-n reality, come animality, releasin fatality, when u try reactin me... L-yrical poetry, when i'm flowin deep, need help, console in me, when i rhyme uknowingly... I-ncredible ghost, that relases the most, Feelings deep in the coast... N-astiest raps, let go's of the inner child intact, divine circles, goin in laps... Y-oung'n existence, rhyme of the instance, death row when i commit this... O-vercoming the evil in, the crazy shit...known as kenival... U-nderestimated lyrical colnel, of the rhymer's journal, heat in the heart, know as the burnin inferno... |
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07-09-03, 04:07 PM
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upin......
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07-09-03, 04:37 PM
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U-nderestimated lyrical colnel, of the rhymer's journal, heat in the heart, know as the burnin inferno...
that was a nice line, I liked the concept alot, although it was kinda unlcear at some points as to what it was you were talking about or referring to nah mean, but thats art. My only real problem wit it is that I couldn't pick up on the cadence and thats a definate problem. Keep spittin n practicin as soon as you get that flow in check holla at me. 1 |
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07-09-03, 05:20 PM
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good look on the feed dunny...upin for mo feed...1
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07-09-03, 06:33 PM
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upin......
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07-10-03, 12:20 PM
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peep mc butcher crew nigga we need some 1 like ya
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07-10-03, 12:31 PM
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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don't peep his crew... go to War Lords... you got madd skill for a newbie.. vocab was ill, flowed pretty good, an' for an acrostic I was really suprised... stay up dun, an' GO TO WarLords try-out page an' drop a verse and a link to this post... 1
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07-10-03, 12:52 PM
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nice
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