Rules:
10 lines, quick
You can spit first, if not, your gonna have to wait till im done eating.......ight.....
but it would be easier if ya just went
and im not gonna feed off urs
no hate votes
Keep it real ight?

Spit---------

cool i'm here
give me a few minutes dawg
is there a time limit
anyway i need like 15-20 i guess
if thats cool

thats ight.............................................. .................................................. ......................................

jus a little somthin,
chek me out

i hope slik is certain dat he is ready for dis lyrical merkin
moms walked in his room and dat pussy was still jerkin

i’m impressed that dis muthafucka wanted to battle me first
hav’em searchin for witchdoctaz cuz he been hit by DaCurse

10 and 6 dis nigga think he SLIK, battling newbies,niga please go back and jack yo dick,
when I finish u gonna wish u woulda slit yo wrist, u should retire cuz fake MC’s just shouldn’t exist

if u look worse than u spit then u are just a disgrace
playin musical chairs wit def kids, still came in last place, dumbass

so sit back and listen as I commence to spitten, cuz yo phony renditions
is not a competition, and u should neva rhyme again unless u get my permission, bitch

go run to mommy and don’t be ashamed cuz I known u fear-it
i hope u fire proof, I’m known for cremating fools wit my lyrics (ashes to ashes)



first battle
nothing much though
hit this up when he spits
holla at cha boy peace

Lemme Spit this real quick....10 Lines...Should be Good....
Lemme Try the Personals....
Hit it off
Check it, 1,2,1,2

*grabs the mic, stares curse in da eyes*

Man, This kid stands here like he has no fear or "hesitation"//1
This is just the beginning, but ima step-it-up so i have more "elevation"//2

-Lemme step this up-
THe only way you got "game" is when you step up to the checkers "board"//3
cuz you aint got no "enegry" cuz i ripped off ur spinal "cord"//4

annoymous man- Damnnnnnnn

*haha*

WHen i look at you, I see yo "ice", but i think its startin to "melt"//5
cuz after all this "heat" im bringing, its the only thing "felt"//6

Lemme show you how the "cards" are delt, right now im keepin ur "face down"//7
Now im "switchin hands"(mic) cuz i just turned your smile into a "frown"//8

Lemme Finish this-------

When you rap, you use the line "ima bring you a curse"//9
Then the laughter begins cuz that line just started and "outburst"//10


out-----

Nice spit man..........I liked it alot.........NO beef............Keepin it real........how old are you? IM a 14 yr ol girl.............................................

i was feelin silks verse on this one ayo
i dont even know if i wanna battle you cus your lyrics are hardcore but ummm.... my vote goes for silk .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............

thanks................uppin 1st............................................... .................................................. ...................

appreciate it dawg
u got this one and oh yea no beef much respect
i read your other battle against the other newbie
good shit on that one too, was mine betta than his
just looking for some honest criticism
keep spitten
i am jus tryin to elevate

but see the thing is you are a "GOOD" newbie, that other newb, he sucked, when i go against newbs, im always hopin that theya re good, its not over yet, just wait fo the final result you did good man.............Props

i think the curse got this in my opinion

if u look worse than u spit then u are just a disgrace
playin musical chairs wit def kids, still came in last place, dumbass

come check my battle out at
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64315

__________________
.TCS.

cool...................................i liked that line too............................................... .................................................. ............

i feel u homie slik thanz for the honesty
thanx hypnotic for coming through
ima check u out in a minute

we need more votes dont we

i have to go wit curse on dis one too
not bad for a newbie
no disrespect slik was jus feelin curse verse a little more
wordplay=curse
flow=curse
vote=curse
good luck to both though

hey thanx for the post and vote rob
yall keep votin on this and please post an honest comment too
holla