16 line max
u spit first
no crew, dr, hate, beef, or any otha bull
no feeding, recycling, or biting

check in and drop ya shit...

im checkin in................................................ .........yall bout ta feel mah shit.............................................. .............for real her we go maan.............................................. ........1

hey knuckle head when i tell u this ur gonna cry//
cuz that winning record of urs is about ta bcom a tie//
see steppin up ta me is like walkin on thin ice//
ur bound ta fall cuz i throw a lyrical hook like mike tyse//
Im gonna go complez and bring it hard//
u cant hurt me im goin psycho tard//
u cant rhyme good even if u were perfect//
i rhyme ELITE wit mah lyrical vertec//
i split minds wit a dime cuz i dont kno when ta quit//
u guy dot bring it hard hes bringin it all beat like a slutty clit//
tha combats on and a knuckle heads but to be come a lobe//
u just got mad inta a ball as big as tha globe//
u cant spit lyricals so take ur broke ass home

blah quick key...

Petrafy Couldn't Worry Me If He Knocked Out Tha Lightz...*
Everybody In JerZ Knowz, Nuthin But Bullshit Comez Outta Seaside Heightz...*
This Kid Iz Slow, I Gave Him All Tha Cluez...
Battling Me Iz Like Boardwalk Gamez, You're Going To Lose...*
Why I Accept This Challenge?, I Should've Known This Kid'll Be Lame...
It'z Not Even Fair, You're Right, We Should've Kept This On AIM...
It'z Over, After This Go Away And Learn From This Defeat...
I Hope You Enjoyed This, This Iz Tha Only Time You'll Battle In Elite...

this one sorta deservez an explanation since alotta ppl don't live in JerZ:

all linez with "*" has to do with hiz location, seaside heightz...
i went there a few dayz ago and tha damn lightz went out in tha whole town...
seaside heightz iz dirty as hell, still fun tho lol...
everybody knowz boardwalkz have gamez...

start tha votez...

tell you the truth knuckle you just wasted your time homie, i mean damn you done merked this kid, way better punches and flow, poll vote- knuckle, ey, knuckle can you please hit this up right quick and poll vote for the best verse, dont forget 2 poll vote aight, i appreciate it dawg, thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64729

1-0 my way...

uppin............................................. ............................................

^ w0rdical... yup. gotta luva merkin'!

2-0 my way...

uppin fo votez............................................. ............................

definately goes to knuckle. Petra you need to make your stuff more complex, basically you had a lot of filler. You notice how Knuckles punches and personals hit way harder even though he keyed his shit, you need to read elite battles and learn how to make hard hitting punches instead of stuff like:
"hey knucklehead when i tell you this you gonna cry//
but you winning record is about to become a tie//"
you see that isnt even a punch, it is filler, shit, all it did was make me cringe to see this in elite. You just keep elevatin and my advice is to check all the stickys in frontlines and in the wackness emergency center for threads on battlin basics. That is how i learned to battle in 4 days. Just tryin to give a rookie some advice aight, peace.

hit this up 4 me aight: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62142

3-0 my way...

uppin fo votez............................................. ...............................

Yeah, like the otehr votes, I feel that Kunckle took this easily, he had a better overall verse and came alot harder than Petrafy
kee pya head up petrafy

vote - Kunckle Head

hit this up with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65084
thx

finally...

4-0 my way...

uppin for this KO................................................ ............................................

Hmmmmmm...Lyrical Slaughter...Knuckle Killed Him...No Need To Quote Coz Its Self Explainitory...Good Shit Man...Keep It Up...

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