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07-10-03, 09:33 AM
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Just Being Real
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to all you dumb assess THIS AINT ged classess
when will you learn? play with FIRE and get used to BURN, hurb! get what you ERN- talk shit!- any man can get shot- AND HIT-keep it real, even BIGGIe got PACed- JA became the first thug to get love doing pop- PUFFY'S caeer haulted this year but still claims he wont stop- and it's a trip- how fake thugs act real,get ripped- then switch-with the latest fashions so people will except- but i diss people to survive no man is exzempt- its natural you get DOGGED,since life's a BITCH- as far as open text-every one of you catch wreck-spend your life HUSTLEN YOUR CAREER LAST now it's in your FINAL STRETCH- there alot of fake thugs-you know who you are when you here kids in clubs-with potential and you give em no love- it must be hard when your overzelous -and jelous-when you claim killer till you really around real felons- fuck with me and i will kill you leaven you torn-then get TED BUNDY to shoot you for necro porn-great rappers are born- not taught to be apraised-wanna see beaf {grow up}watch my middle finger get raised- moching me is mochory-to the 3 rd degree-BLASPHOMY- you can go to HELL and survive long enough to be alive when they perform the ortopsy- Diss myself on track so GOD can diss me back-im loven animosoty- but im gaurenteed to go to heaven for real-cause on duets ive saved many careers from being killed- see i got the heart for this-brain to be twise as nice and deliver hits- that can make your brain twist- like the motions of a wrist- rappers dropping dead-nigguz catching aids through head-fake catz claim the code of the street turning then tap they boys in to the feds- that's why i dont rap boute being gangsta-or being a thug- whats the point the answer-be me catching slugs- im from the street to but if you live it-then why promote on qoutes and turn it to a gimic- well im staying me-staying being M.K.C- even if i sell crappy-i know i was who i was ment to be and die happy- Last edited by WORD~PERFECT : 07-10-03 at 10:20 AM. |
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07-10-03, 10:10 AM
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^^^ nice finisher... overall it was o.k.. elevate a lil on your wordplay.... 1... |
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07-10-03, 10:20 AM
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thnxs but what lacked
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07-11-03, 08:57 AM
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UPPIN
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07-11-03, 10:58 AM
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feelin' it... nice wordplay with the biggy got PACed line... flow was a li'l off... also the moching me is mochery bar... ill... keep it up dawg..
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07-12-03, 10:07 PM
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uppin
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07-13-03, 02:20 AM
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..Soft Focus..
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that was once again an ill drop lol kjeep it comin man i like readin your drops
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07-13-03, 06:19 PM
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THNX PEEP B.R.E BAZTAD
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07-13-03, 06:36 PM
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IP:
nice piece, long, but nice either way
had some punches n what not nice ending lines and seems like you had to get a shitload off ya chest nice piece, much respects, what lacked?....hmmmm nuthin really...would've liked to have heard it in audio but anyways, keep droppin, peace thun |
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07-14-03, 08:27 AM
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thnx twin mad respects to you
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07-14-03, 07:04 PM
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yo dat was an ill drop
word perfect |
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