There's so...(scratch)
So, so much, mu(error)
so much pa(re-re-mix)
-Lemme Break it down-
Theres so much pain....(thats how it goes)

Yelling and screaming, Cursing and Fighting, To much for the Ears//
I thought "Grown-ups" chose to have these "Parenting Years"//
I have so much "fear", As i walk through the Wooden Door//
If i get caught past "curfew", I'll taste nothing but Blood and the Floor//
Please No More, I cant take all the Bruises and Scratches on my face//
To some im known as a "outstanding" girl, But here im known as "disgrace"//
I hate this place, I feel like im trapped in the "Animal Dome"//
That Story Line is a Lie, I have no "Home Sweet Home"//
I'd Rather be Alone, becuz im basically Diving into "Insanity"//
Support, Love, Caring, Thats shit, I have no Family//





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Shiznit's Thoughts:

hmm....thats awesome...i mean regardless of the fact that this was really short..but man the contents and the whole terminology of it just brilliant..

nice execution of words...the content was very deep ..lots of emotion combined with anger...thats good...i love readin it

nice!

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thanks fo checkin it out.................Uppin fo more comments

Short and Powerfull..........damn Nice shit ma

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