DEAR MOMMA,

DONT KNOW HOW U DID IT HIT BY SO MUCH STRUGLE/
KEPT US ALL IN LINE AND ALWAYS OUT OF TROUBLE/
NOW I KNOW THAT IT WAS HARD BUT I DIDNT UNDERSTAND/
LOOKED TO FALL BUT WAS BOUGHT UP BY YOUR FORGIVING HAND/
SINGLE MOTHER OF SEVEN ALWAYS SEEMED TO DO FINE/
THAT WAS THREE YEARS AGO NOW UR MARRIED WITH NINE/
IM ONLY NEARLY FIFTEEN STILL GOT A LOT TO LEARN/
I KNOW FOR HELP AND ADVICE TO U I CAN TURN/
DAD LEFT U ALONE A BIT PART MAN/
BUT SO WE WOULD HAVE A FATHER U DID WHAT U CAN/
TO LET US SEE HIM AS MUCH AS HE COULD/
COS HE SPOILT US I THOUGHT THAT HIS DOCTORIN WAS GOOD/
BUT NOW IM OLDER AND I REALISE THAT ISNT WHAT MATTERED/
HE WASNT THERE FOR SUPPORT WHEN THE FAMILY SEEMED SHATTERED/
I AINT SAYIN I DONT LOVE HIM COS THAT WUD BE A LIE/
BUT HE SHOULD HAVE BEEN THEIR ALL THOSE NIGHTS WHEN U CRIED/
COS U WERE DOIN UR BEST BUT U THOUGHT U WENT WRONG/
HAVE TO TELL U,U ARE PERFECT SO IM WRITIN THIS SONG/

ELEVEN YEARS OF MY LIFE SPENT WITH SIX SIBLINGS/
THEN CAME MY YOUNGEST BROTHER U NEVER MADE IT A BIG THING/
JUST ASKED US FOR UR HELP AND WE MADE SURE WE GAVE IT/
YOU EVEN TOOK OUR ADVICE ON WOT U SHOULD NAME IT/
POOR LITTLE BOY FOUR MIDDLE NAMES/
AND TWO YEARS LATER YOU WERE PREGNANT AGAIN/
I TRIED TO GET ALONG WITH MY STEP DAD/
THOUGH IT WAS HARD THE ONLY HAPPINESS IVE SEN U HAVE/
MY SISTER NOT AS THOUGHTFUL WANTED TO GET RID/
REALLY WANTED HIM TO LEAVE THANK GOD HE NEVER DID/
CO I DONT KNOW HOW U WOULD COPE TWO BROKEN DOWN MARRIGES/
IM GLAD HE DIDNT GIVE UP COS ITS THE ONE THING SAD IN IT/
U DESERVE A LOT OF HAPPINES COS UR A FRIEND AND A MOTHER/
U FOUND IT ON YOUR WEDING DAY IN THE EYES OF UR LOVER/
I FOUND CHANGE HARD A NEW MAN IN MY HOUSE/
REMEMBER ONCE WEN MY FEELINGS ALL BURST OUT/
I ORDERED THE STRANGER TO PACK HIS BAGS AND LEAVE/
BUT WEN I SAW IN UR EYES FELT LIKE SIEZIN TO BREATH/
I APOLIZED AND FROM THAT DAY WE BOTH GOT ALONG/
HAVE TO TELL U.U ARE PERFECT SO IM WRITN THIS SONG

THANK YOU YOUR THE ONE PERFECT PERSON ON EARTH

YO GIVE ME SUM FEEDBACK

YO
HELP A NIGGA OUT

JUS SAY WHAT U THINK IF ITS CRAP DEN SAY

WHY IS IT THAT WHEN WRITE ABOUT A DEAD FRIEND PEOPLE WANNA KNOW BUT NOW I POUR MY FELLING ABOUT THE WOMAN THAT GAVE BIRTH TO ME AND RAISED ME NO ONE WANTS TO KNOW THIS LYRICS ARE HEART FELT NOT LIKE THE RUBBISH SOME PEOPLE POST

hey man i liked this drop, sounds like your mom had a hard life, but you were there for her. Being there for someone can make all the difference...Nice simple drop, I liked it...

can ya check my verse out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65833

nice

YO THAT WAS HOT DOG 4/5 MICS

nicer drop feelin it man...keep droppin

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

thanxs man
peace
took ur time to reply though
im jus playin peace