i cud diss 50 cent in 50 ways,
shoot 50 strays,
for 50 nights and 50 days,
he cud run to 50 j's,
but ill still be beating up on him like 50 gays,
at nite u know 50 prays,
and 50 lays,
and in his head 50 says,
he wish he has the strength of 50 breys,
and 50 sprays,
like 50 essays,
but to me 50 style is grey,
and ill see 50 with my a to da k,
u can probably catch 50 in some lingerie,
he thinks his worth the cost of 50 monets,
but 50s out of say,
and out of play,
and 50 u bout to get sleigh,
so walk away,
or run cry go get dre,
and we can all go play,
with my 9 milli chrome autospray,
oh-ok,

I think its wack, use some more creativity in your verse.....

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mistere seem like you a bitch wit a dick and you prolly hate 50 so much cuz you can't stick your dick up him...also cuz he won't let you cuz you so small motherfucker...why wit the beef...cuz why diss him...hes got a record deal and amazingly talented...you got no record deal and your you ain't talented...actually you are cuz i neva seen sucha wack piece in my time on here...ELEVATE IMMENSLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!..1..!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why Diss Someone Whos Not Gonna Reply? Whats The Concept dawg..eh?

ey yo pot1ent wot u chattin bout fool,
you try n act ghetto but u just some fool,
keep running ur mouth ull be some dead fool,
wanna hit me back please go ahead fool,
yo ryhtmic tendicies, i aint gotta beef wit chu,
im dissin 50 cos im puttin across my view,
yeah he got a record deal and yeah he got money,
and i liked him before he blew and i aint being funny,
i knew bout him when u was just knowin eminem,
i knew bout my boy 50 and his g-g-g g unit men,
but all he says is how he got shot 9 times,
he says it all the time, in every single rhyme,
u name me a track when he dont talk bout gettin capped,
and ill stand up infront of everyone and give u a big clap.

thatz true 50 alwayz talk about gettin shot in everything

"when i was eating icecream i got shot"

wtf nobody cares if u got shot

i think he wack personally,

"i been hit wit a few shells but i dont walk wit a limp"

right....................

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oi safe yeah

i mean i think da boy is good u know, but we all know taht u been shot, and we all know dat u still alive, so talk bout other shit get me!

ROFLMFAO............................. it hurts i laffed so much

aight....it sounded ok and all that....its a good subject....but u shuda been able to do it better than that....like...that was some "skit" shit.....or maybe a hook.....but it coulda been better....

dont get me wrong..u were creative and all....using the number 50 all the way thru...but u coulda filled it out with Multies and word plays....some punchlines would be dope....jus think of the punchlines you'd get dissin 50....

anyway.....i aint a 50 hater and all....but then again...i wudnt jump to stop any bullets hittin him either....

anyway....yall check my shit now...."Cash Stripped"....peace

i dont like this at all.... first off its a fuckin text diss, if ur gonna go at a mainstream rapper, use audio, have the balls to do that atleast, and be way more creative

thats too nice homeboy, it totally sucked dick man, this newbie comes here on RB trys to put out a 50 diss (which is totally whack) cuz many peeps on this site don't like him, while 50 is hot...
why diss somebody if he has a recorddeal makes millions and can kill you in 1 line, man I don't get it!
fuck u, MisterE!

YO DAWG NIGGAZ HATIN IN ON 50, NIGGA GOT MILLIONS OF DOLLAZ AND WOULD EAT THIS CAT UP WIT ONE LINE,,,

yo all u haters can suck on my dick yeah....

ill take any one of u chumps in a one on one....

just saw da word biatch!

man i aint hatin on 50 cos he got a record deal and shit, i aint even hatin on 50...he just gettin on my nerves by saying how he got shot 9 times....

fucking i know people dat been shot 9 times...u see them writing shit bout it!

SHUT DA FUCK UP............U whack muh fucka , go learn how too freestlye......................WHACK MUH FUCKA

gay and closed.

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