LISTEN..

ADDRESSIN-THA-LAMES| DONT END UP WIT A TECK-IN-YA-FRAME|
YA CHEST-AND-YA-BRAIN| GET GUNNED DOWN AND LEFT-IN-THA-RANGE| THA MESSAGE-HAS-CAME| THAT TECKNIQUE'S THA BEST-IN-THA-GAME| I'M HERE NOW AND I AINT TAKIN LESS-THAN-THA-FAME| WHO STRETCHIN-IT-MANE| BUT DONT TEST-THA-KID| WIT A COUPLE R.KELLY SHELLS THAT WILL MOLEST-YA-RIBS| YA CHEST-YA-WIG| I LET THA WESSON BLESS-YA-KIDZ| PLEASE? I BLAZE-CATZ| AND LEAVE MORE WHOLES THAN A WAVE-CAP| SO TAKE-THAT| I MADE RAP AND KNOWN TO DISMANTLE-CATZ| I'M HOTT NIGGAZ THINKIN I SPIT CANDLE-WAX| DONT MAKE ME DRAW THA HADLE-BACK| DAMN I GOTTA GO I'LL SPIT MORE LATA

Flows nice... but after that this piece is wack. No offense dude, but the concept is more played out than my PS1, and your vocab is average at best. Needs work. If your battle record is 20-1 over the internet, I don't even wanna see who you battled. I hope you can bring it better than that... elevate and show me something... Peace...

needs improving but i have herd so much woarse...so i can honestly say that you got ill potential