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BANNED By Jae Cyph
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im about to go to yo town,take u down,a backstreetboy and beat down this new kid on tha block
i'll knock ur flow like pattys old house when doug threw da rock got u stuck in a closet with no way out i got this fag locked get off my jock stop actin like u are what ur not u aint stapped like a tube top i got a chip on ur shoulder and i'll eat it this aint scrambled eggs bitch u better beat it I get a kick out of leavin wankstas like u defeated tryin to sneek to catch me wit your wifey but u couldnt get a peak kid who did u see walkin down the street, it was ur mom & me my boy was like yo son, thanks 4 passin her on 2 me shes on a knee but didnt score a touchdown im hittin a homer im the bomb u see its 2 bad u couldnt make a hundred bucks if u was playin monopoly if i knocked u down u wouldnt stand up if u where doin comedy spittin ur pathological fiction will leave u lyin in da street rymes are a mysteriousely mythological sorry bitch i aint greek u couldnt catch brains if u was usin a catchers mit, or an outfeilders glove im never spitn the writtin its from the top im gettin this shit, show me some love |
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uppin this
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Wow..I didn't like this at all..Horrible disses..Maybe you should try something else or just stick to freestyling..That was bad.
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BANNED By Jae Cyph
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^aight thats ur opinion fag boy..uppin !
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NAH, SON THIS WAS DESCENT KID. YOU HAD SOME NICE LINES IN THERE THAT WERE CATCHY. WHOEVER YOU WERE DISSIN' SHOULD FEEL THE AFTERMATH OF THIS HOMES. UPPINNN!
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that was nice, i even got the doug funny joke but others mite not.
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This was aiight... at best. Some OK lines in it, but the format messed it all up for me. I had to read it several times to get where the lines end.
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BANNED By Jae Cyph
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Thanks 4 Tha Critisicm I Appreciate It Uppin 4 More Feedback
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NEEDS WORK BUT IS A FOUNDATION TO BUILD TO BETTER NO DOUBT IVE HERD WOARSE KEEP POSTEN
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BANNED By Jae Cyph
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^aight kid thanks
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