this some shit i wrote cause im shippin off the equipment tomorow and am going to be waiting insanely for my pro tools setup to come so......... enjoy

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Beat Is Pretty dope ..

Flow Is Pretty Good, Content Pretty good, Emotion Pretty Good, Delivery Is Good..

Overall Good Track .

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Listenin...Beat Is Dope...Lyrics Are Good...Emotion Is Good...Flowing Well...Done Well...Nice...Pz...

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yo that was good like the gun slingers bet...I heard it on the charts.

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i like it man...its so fucked...ive listened to 3 underground artists in a row and u all sound the same...thats a 1st. Nice flow..ILL BEAT!!

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really feelin' the beat... "nice" flow.. lol, a little short, but was still on point..

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Since you say your offline and ish I'ma treat you like you was a rapper trying to get a fanbase.

THe beat is nice that's always a good thing BUT your delivery is shakey and for a emcee that does shows and drops radio edits that's a no no. Make better useage of your adlibs; this can make or break a track.