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Whyte Ave. 2 28.57%
ILLEGAL CLOWN 5 71.43%
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Old 07-15-03, 04:32 AM   #1
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Whyte Ave vs. ILLEGAL CLOWN

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20 lines max
no hatin/ dik ridin votes
you spit first
DO YO THANG
 
Old 07-15-03, 04:36 AM   #2
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i'll vote on this once ya'll spit
but ya'll peep my battles it's pretty hard
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65773
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Old 07-15-03, 05:16 AM   #3
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aight check it

You “Illegal” because you set up gay “prostitution” on the street/
Its on the first time, “cops” say you’re a constant repeat/
You a “Clown” cause its only little kids your raps “entertain”/
All yo shit is like Dr. Seus, simplistic and plain/

My rhymes spit strong, like winds of Gale, and hit like hail, into you they impale/ (Gale force winds)
Like a train you about to derail, movin off the trail, you’s about to fail/
Your rhymes so horrible, worse then a “blind” man without any “Braille”, no punches no detail/

To win this, the voters you will have to manipulate, cause all your rhymes do is nauseate/
My rhymes gunna evaporate your spit, comin at you so hard to decimate/
Now I’m Irate you fuckin suck kid, your piss poor, I text better on the snow when I urinate/ (Irate – Extremely Angry)
It’s not hate I’m tryin to create, jus don’t battle above your league, a no show is your only escape/
Your rhymes are like “Value Village”, all of them “second rate”/ (Value Village, second hand store)
I could be in a state of Distrait, and still my rhymes would lacerate and incinerate/ (distrait – absent minded)
After your rhymes I evaluate, and know that a loss in on your plate/
I’m sure the other 5 will incorporate, ask you to join the circle and masturbate/ (5 others I beaten)

spit..
 
Old 07-15-03, 05:21 AM   #4
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DOPE DOPE DOPE DOPE DOPE SHIT FUH SHO, datz wut im talkin bout Whyte, reppin da E wit skill son, i would vote but u know i aint got no 100 posts

peace
 
Old 07-15-03, 05:28 AM   #5
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yo i liked ur shit whyte ave.....i will vote wen dis kat spits so in the mean time hit my battle up wid MC-VIet
HONESTLY
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Old 07-15-03, 03:29 PM   #6
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fuck man u gunna spit or wat??
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Old 07-15-03, 03:58 PM   #7
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NICE SHIT WHYTE
that shit was off da hook
i'll vote when this otha cat spit

Hit that up wit an honest vote!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65817
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Old 07-15-03, 05:10 PM   #8
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hope this shit ain't a no show.............nice spit Whyte Ave.

check out my battle and drop an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65941
 
Old 07-15-03, 07:34 PM   #9
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fuck this kat usin a line in my verse...he's escapin a merkin by no showin...wat a punk bitch
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Old 07-16-03, 12:34 AM   #10
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Two fuckin no shows in a row...whats worse is they set up the fuckin battle...FUCK they should be banned
 
Old 07-22-03, 12:59 AM   #11
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fuck dat i got off b4 you even responded and i didnt even know you did i jus checked right now FUCK dat im gettin at you dog
 
Old 07-22-03, 01:46 AM   #12
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SHIT TO RB I APOLOGIZE I DIDNT REALIZE DIS NIGGA SPIT, ILL PROBABLY LOSE JUS FO DA FACT DAT I WAS LATE BUT IM STILL CUMMIN AT HIM CUZ IT WAS AN HONEST MISTAKE PEACE...

you got me confused wit dem dudes dat you kick it wit/
no bitches round my side a town, i dont know bout where you live/
on whyte ave... but on my block we beatin niggas up in col or heat/
ima entire fleet of soldias, yo streak is ova, im bringin defeat/
i battle above my league cuz how else you get stronga/
no longa stay where i belong, move on to bigga n betta im on /
a rampage makin yo body my stage, yo strange rhymes sound deranged im jus tryin to get da record straight/
you make up deez places like value village, cuz you aint creative to say what you feelin/
wit real vocab you tried, but yo mind is too small, yo head is too big so im jus tryin to even it all/
you jus use synonomous words, and 3 syllable verbs,jus jumble em togetha so they have no real worth/
yo horrible you like structua, ill chuck a ditcionary at you so you could have betta luck/
next time you step up, you need to read up...do sum grammar worksheets, n practice sentence set-up/
im fed up wit deez dudes thinkin they sound smart, but yo rhymes smell tart, like a seafood mart (jus a generalization i didnt make up bullshit like you)/
or like yo girls body parts but i wont go there playa, jus take to heart, deez words i barked youll probly use em lata/
but i aint worried cuz i already burried you wit em n mixed you like a mcflurry/
so fast da screen is blurry but read slowly so you can comprehend/

you aint a friend, you aint a foe, you jus a straight bitch/
i think i heard betta rhymes from aliens watchin lilo n stitch/
get a grip on reality, battlin me is self fatality, n sadly you took a stab at me/
sad to see, im outta dis galaxy, didnt even leave a rash on me
BITCH
 
Old 07-22-03, 02:01 AM   #13
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I'm a go with the clown, he wasn't too good, but he delivered a message and had WAY better flow. Whyte ave was all vocab. Illegal also fed, but it was all good. Thats just my opinion though.

Can someone vote on my battles in my sig. Drop an HONEST vote.

Vote - Illegal Clown
 
Old 07-22-03, 02:22 AM   #14
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good lookin out emcee rashaddy ill check yo shit too
aiight
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uppin for votes>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
 
Old 07-22-03, 02:24 AM   #15
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and i meant "you lack structua" not "you like structua" i made a typo>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
 
 


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