10-15 LINES CHECKIN IN

hmm aite..
check dis cat just a nerd feelin my flows but stepped to me an nows he fearin this//
im bout to add another number on this herbs right side of his record claimin hes a corrupt Lyrcist//
on the real this femcee gets scared when i flash the skillz,cuz i spit hard -shit/blastin//
this homie knows hes phony when hes best friends wit the garbage basket//
my spits are able to fracture ya skull like my verse knocked ya back in ya casket//
u cud use em tecks an em knives ill use the text an still stay alive//
ill leave my spit hauntin u cuz i scared u on the path of life//
Ill shoot hollow shells leave dis bitch dead on the site//
u just cant spit plain an simple sluts only swallow at nite//
despite the fact u raps cant stand toe to toe wit my vocab spultered an drippin all over the floor//
ill have cats votin on me like i was bush an u was clintons bitch named al gore//
can ya read em multies between them lines they got u shakin like i had a nine to ya throat//
tellin u to type till u die cuz i no from previous matters u beg for votes,plus ya games a hoax//
u got the wakcest skillz an i doubt ull get a vote,if u spit like me ud think you was ill//
u remid me of myself but bite off me an ill have ya ass killed//
cuz u aint winnin if u cud, im a fukin menace an ya flows gettin denied//
u just sinnin speakin em lies ,i see the future an it lookin good,at the end of this sentence im gainin an win a submitted this reply//

aiiyo, dese ferocious punch lines hit ya where it hurts like low blows////
if ya stuck faucets inya ass u still wouldnt have shit w/which ta flow////
ur lyrically lost no internet search engine could derive u////
ill stack up ya newbees. n one by one piledrive u////
ill be a mastermind n put subliminal messages in ya instrumentals////
u couldnt be rap if ya brand name wuz reynolds////
ur lines couldnt be phat if u typed em in bold too////
ima corrupt lyricist n im lyrically scoldin u////
ull get merked.......mic or text ull be faded////
u spittin raw milk cuz ya shit is outdated.////
ull get slashed w/dese linguistical weapons like ya c-section////
ill secret ya life liquids n give ya head n erection////
im an assassin w/dese lyricst cuz i spit insanity w/ violence////
w/da quantity of ma skill i can single handedly take out a 20 man alliance////
im juss skill n lyrics, rhythmicaly embodied////
thass why lucifer game me consent to pulsate ya body////
w/dis linguistically rapin lyricst ill rip u like virgin cunts////
only skill w/ya mouff u got is deep throatin to cocks at once////
yo ya whackness bring nuffin but da feelin to punchyaback////
ill fill lyrical hollow bullets n spray atya chest ta make u a hunchback////
i single handedly merked u w/dis textual poisonous breath////
poll votes fo corrupt cuz dey eyewitnessed me takin ya life after takin ya death////

**not da best shit but ah well** one.....

yo uppin fo votes....poll votes only plz dont free post...im out one............................................... .

Honestly Young Mik took this one
i liked his shit a lil bit more
it had slightly more humor than lyricist did
but it was a good battle overal

vote-young mik

drop a fair vote on my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65548
^^^ peep it out and i'll drop a fair vote on this battle ^^^

WUTS CRACINWIT EM VOTES....

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some punches was good from young but curpt aaaahh i didnt feal his verse that much my vote goes to mik cuz he hat ok flow and ok punches he had a even verse threw out and lyric wasnt good but no hate keep elevatin

young took it betta everything in my opinion props 2 both tho im out holla

peep mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0270#post630270

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yea w0rd...

uppin for my last vote...cm on wheres it at

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tyte shit young mik, i think u had betta punches corrupt wasnt bad either............................................ .................................................

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