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Verses By : THURSDAY

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checkin in................................................ .................................................. .....................

yeah yeah yeah...

fuckin retarded i say...
i dont even know why the hell Sureal put me in this shithole.

i hate you... i hate me.. yeah... i wanna go fuckin kill myself.
hehe, so if i dont turn up by thursday u know im dead.
Bai!

I know u wont miss me...

STFU Asshole, im here so FUCK ME!




I’m battlin a Gay Color, I’ll put a Shell in his back like a Turtle
Your a Fag Magnet, no Wonder Homosexuals Stick to Purple!

TiMe to DiSmantle this fag … \watch me bash him in
The Definition of iLL!? Hah .. more like the Antonym!
i Cant stand this kid .. Haze gets Ripped with Ease
i'll Leave this Little Faggot a Sore Loser ..... Literally!
Splittin Ya Knee's .. This ugly fuck cant Handle da Gore
Haze the Prize? No Wonder its not a Handsome Reward!
This is a Tragical War, Losin to newbies, so fuck Lies
Cuz Haze is quick to Die, if you put em in the FrontLines!

I split kids, my Battle tactics kill, and after this text
the only person see'ing you, is the lil' kid off of six sense!

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supathug818: sureal
The Sureal One: what
The Sureal One: make it quik
supathug818: check this thread its concerning the LLL league
supathug818: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=&postid=650210
supathug818: very important
The Sureal One: go back to the thread
supathug818: k
The Sureal One: write a verse
The Sureal One: and drop it
The Sureal One: u have 2 an a half hours until deadline


iight so im gonna spit in a bit

so bitch you thought you would win with something that weak?...hahahahah ya got another thing comming

yo yo,
examin you but theres a bulge in ur pants yo this-mans-cross-dressin,i hate asian men so ill murder u n theyll discover ur body n this its a veitnam-lost-veteran//
i think your glasses were clogged up wen you thought i wasnt ill,bitch you wish you had this skill,on a quest to win this battle well i guess it wont be ful-filled//

my verbal 'bullets' are deadly, wear a bulletproof vest but u still wont be able to 'chest' it,my flow, the devil possessed it, you must be a man-of-god cuz u sound like you were molested//
its a sad fact that losers also always have to be some of the most pathetic contestents,my flow makes u look like a 'mis-match' that cant 'add', cuz u couldnt 'add'-'dress' it//

to show that im sly, i 'rip off morbids thigh', just to prove she has a 'lower figure'-than-mine,and disfigure her spine, re-arrange its design, beat in her brain, to prove she cant configure-this-rhyme//
im a one man firing squad, to win is requiring fraud, i fuck rappers up in the blink-of-an-eye,the forum's inspiring god, so dont bother to try, thats bordering on the brink-of-a-lie//

bitch your my maid now start the serving,ill knock ur head off so u wont feel this murking,how you gonna compete with elite wen in this rap game ur still learning//
you thought you would take the easy win and retain your undefeated LLL league score,bitch your a constiotutional whore,ive just ended this battle and your pleading on the floor,bruised and soar//

this was a good battle... both styles were good so i won't decide upon the style ya came
both had good flow... purple had more multi's tho
punches were good, morbid's were humerous, purples were more complex
i'ma give it to purple... i liked his somewhat personals more
good battle tho

^^Werd., good battle morbid, looks like u should use that picture to urself...lol...,

VOTES!!

Sorry morbid but
this nigga straight up killed you
damn
you shoulda took more time morbid

vote-purple haze

looks like everyone was wrong since u thought morbid would beat me cuz evolve underestimated her ...looks like yall underestimated me tsk tsk tsk....lol

iight lets get more votes!

I’m battlin a Gay Color, I’ll put a Shell in his back like a Turtle
Your a Fag Magnet, no Wonder Homosexuals Stick to Purple!

ehh,could have been done better...ok start

TiMe to DiSmantle this fag … \watch me bash him in
The Definition of iLL!? Hah .. more like the Antonym!

i liked this

i Cant stand this kid .. Haze gets Ripped with Ease
i'll Leave this Little Faggot a Sore Loser ..... Literally!

ehh,not feeling

Splittin Ya Knee's .. This ugly fuck cant Handle da Gore
Haze the Prize? No Wonder its not a Handsome Reward!

aight,kind played

This is a Tragical War, Losin to newbies, so fuck Lies
Cuz Haze is quick to Die, if you put em in the FrontLines!

aight

I split kids, my Battle tactics kill, and after this text
the only person see'ing you, is the lil' kid off of six sense!

ehh...not feelin the closer...still a pretty good verse....

purple

examin you but theres a bulge in ur pants yo this-mans-cross-dressin,i hate asian men so ill murder u n theyll discover ur body n this its a veitnam-lost-veteran//
i think your glasses were clogged up wen you thought i wasnt ill,bitch you wish you had this skill,on a quest to win this battle well i guess it wont be ful-filled//

u need to shorten ur bars man..shits r stretched enormously...need to get to the point quicker,makes ur bars drawn own...not feeling this opener tho

my verbal 'bullets' are deadly, wear a bulletproof vest but u still wont be able to 'chest' it,my flow, the devil possessed it, you must be a man-of-god cuz u sound like you were molested//
its a sad fact that losers also always have to be some of the most pathetic contestents,my flow makes u look like a 'mis-match' that cant 'add', cuz u couldnt 'add'-'dress' it//

again...horrible stretched,makes the punch weak...wasnt feeling the wordplay either

rest of ur verse was pretty much the same

vote=morbid..her verse was straight to the point...had harder hitting punches and personals and her bars werent stretched a mile long....

mmmm.... ya... we'll see. yup.

im hungry... how bout "herb on a bun" ?

hahaha sry. i had to say it!

Vote - MordBid


Why .. ? All Around Better Verse ..
Purple, Get a New Style, That One
You Got is So Newbish .. Your Lines
Are Smiles Long, And You Come So
Basic, With Half Ass Played Shit ..
MoRdbid Came Doper, Her Style
is WAAAY Better, and Her punches
Were ON POINT .. lol@Purple
Thinkin Hes GOnna Win, Riiiight ..
Go Elevate ..

Punches - Morbid
Flow - Morbid
Structure - Mordbid
Overall - Morbid

Elevate Bro .. Thats All You Need ..

Pz

Damn i wanted to vote for Purple so bad..... but he killed it with those long drawn out lines of his... and the - in between multis didnt help much either.... alot of newbie type punches

Morbid.. your verse was aight... nothing really hard... AND DO ME A FAVOR... STOP USING THOSE "LITERALLY" LINES.... THIS IS THE SECOND WEEK IN A ROW... but other than that you had the better verse.....

vote Morbid

I liked morbid because her punches took pieces out of the character while Purple just took piece out of her body. Also her's was short and sweet, (and the pic gets extra laughs also, lol)

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