Alright New Rules..

8-20 LINE Maximum

Check Ins : TUESDAY

Verses By : THURSDAY

No Biting, D/R, Recycling of Any Kind..

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*Grabs the Mic*

IceBerg420: Ummm who is this I'm battlin.........Pot1ent......
Looooooserrrrr...... Lets go

Pot1ents "Live roadkill" so watch me "run over this cat", His Punches couldnt hit "Jack" even if "Jill" lead the attack/

Yo check it....

U couldn't "face me" even If I let u suck my dick, U couldnt "spit hot shit" even if yo ass was sittin on a 200 degree toil-et/

Forget about winnin bitch u never stood a chance, Like People walkin the streets again rockin "M.C. Hammer Pants"/ (It just wont happen)

You wanna dance bitch cmon then letz waltz, And watch my gat leave a crack in ya back deeper than the "San Andres Fault"/

My assaults are like Paul Walk(er), "2 fast 2 furious", cuz I got 2 gats who's curious, who wanna get merked so serious?/

Pot1ent dumbass, wanna get-blasted-into-his-casket, naw the stupid bastard just wanted-to-get-his-ass-kicked/

Like a "free Head Parlor" he came to the "right place", Have his ass screamin "Help me Jesus" like his name was "Ma$e"/

Punch afta punch I'm devourin ya rap for breakfast-&-lunch, I gotta hunch, U aint Po1tent, u one of the lost kids from the "Brady Bunch"/

Pot1ent Brady The Lost Baby, wanna rap like Slim Shady, Crazy motha Fucka who walks around dressed like a Lady/ (ha Ha)

Fuckin drag queen Its over you've lost, Like Snoop dogg when thought he "Paid the costs to be the Boss"/

Fuckin drag queen Its over you've lost, Like Snoop dogg when he thought he "Paid the costs to be the Boss"/

Thats what the last line is supposed to say......
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*Bell rings...school starts*

Me and IceBerg are the same in some ways…

We both true to are names I bring a potent opponent to his game,
With my heat he melts like a iceberg yet flows cold blood in veins/(he dead)
Also…
We both aspiring rappers wanting to make our names be known,
While he ain’t started Im here driving forward makin the next zone/
He’s (re)cycling backwards cuz he hopes to be known in history,
You will be buddy as the only dude to be rappin wit a labatomy/(no brain)

This is why we different...

Warming
Go up against my style like putting your head in a crocodile, you no your gonna snap,
How you gonna reach your 8 mile when you can’t even bite Slims style let alone rap/

The punches
The only time you stand-alone is when you enter an ugly contest,
Bitch you scared everyone else home they had one-look n lost interest/

Just like sharing this battle you’ll loose prophet, another loss on ya record,
I no your elementary n may not be able to read…its 17, that’s all that’s bettered/

Cuz this dude hasn’t elevated at all since he first started rap battling,
Your rhymes aren’t disses there self indulgent, cuz you sat masterbating/

…While writing rhymes, you sat for days trying but still came up short,
The reality is this guys sanity doesn’t exist cuz its crazy playing in my court/


The merking
This gay could only drop heated shit on a winters day,(next year aswell)
You loosing will be known quicker than aids pervade/(damn that fast)

You wont even be spotted when I pop-ya like a pimple,
This guys axe-me(acne) shit will be sorted when I clear-his-sol/(clearisol)

oNe

are you 11 years old ?



vote goes like this :

IceBerg420... ok spit.. not to good.. i didnt like most.

po1ent.... ok spit.. better than iceberg.. better punches..




both verse need work.. but

po-1 gets this battle;

Aight
this was sorta wack
but props to ya guys anyways
IceBurg u talk alot of shit but u can neva back it up
like in our battle i KO'd ya ass
but oh well
Pot1ent i've seen u come harder but u sitll got my vote
vote=po1ent

^^agrees

vote - pot1ent bcos his lines seemed more elevated

i mean Iceburg

"Like a "free Head Parlor" he came to the "right place", Have his ass screamin "Help me Jesus" like his name was "Ma$e"/"

mase.. one of the played lines in rap and you started the battle with "If i let you suck my dick" WTF ??

i was feelin ice more..his flow was betta and he had sumwut of betta punches...potient u'r verse was aight nuthin really stood out...vote=ice berg,,,oneee

Vote pot1ent

Came harder in pretty much all categories, flow and punches...Ice you need to elevate quite a bit.

flow-iceberg
personals-pot1ent
punches-iceberg had nice start, but endin sucked, pot1ent, not as hot as icebergs beginin but stayed steady wit the style, this goes to pot1ent
vocab-pot1ent

mah vote- pot1ent

Pot1ent Took This In His First Week Battle Against Another New Comer In IceBerg 420 ...

Thus Making Them IceBerg420 (0-1) ... And Pot1ent (1-0)

The Very Best Of Luck To Both Of You In The Weeks To Come..

-Sureal