Ight......LiL Rusty....But Ima Try....
Rules:
10 Lines...
Check In First...
Start Keystylin When You Check In...
Dont Take Fuckin 2 Hours To Post...
Keep It Real...

Ima Start Keyin When You Check In.....Hopefully.....

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aihgt playa checkin in.....................
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aint gonna take 2 hours gimme at the most 25 min
cuz im eatin too..........................................
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ugh im so sorry, but i gotta get off, iw as just bout to write my verse...sorry man....i promise right hwen i can get a chance to get back on, i will spit.............im not pre-writin either, im good fo my word. I'll get back at ya TONIGHT. Promise.......No doubt......Payce

sorry again

its all good playa ................
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this aint gonna get to personal but take one look and i wouldn't think twice
about not usin u as a urinel/
poor draino down ur throat so we can all hear your voice, stick my dick in ur
mouth its nice and moist/
im gonna smoke you like a heater (cig), i was with you hooker girl friend gave her
15 cents she as cheap as a parkin meeter/
you bitten rhymes you fucken cheater, ur girl 10 year old tight i can tell u got a
small peter/
pore some merical grow on it and is should sprout out, but insted it will get sucked
in and a pussy will pop out/ haha
the best thing you could do is drink a can a red bull and fly away cuz
it gives you wings/
slik you like a tick you suck, the blood flowin from ur pants is from u jerkin so hard
you holdin ur dick in ur palm/
the next thing ya know you gonna be soakin ya dick in ebalm. and tryin to smoke it
to get a buzz/
im smoke you jus like i did my cuz, you can gimme the better fly flick just
like ur girl does/ lol
you told me you were rusty you din say your girl was crusry, nasty, u were in front me and
i smelt u and i din pass me/




this is real sloppy do dawg no need to try to hard

Sorry Bout the wait......got kicked off but im back now....
Heres My 10 Lines.....
Rusty and Quick...

--Opener--

Its Just Like 'Math', Im Havin 'Problems' Wit You, Cant Figure Out If I Should 'Slice' Or 'Shoot' Right Through//1

--Merk--
You 'Playin' Lines Like You Was A Little Kid In 'Music Class'//2
You Cant 'Pay Attention' Cuz My Rhymes Are Going To 'Fast'//3

When You See My Gun You Runnin, Perfect Discription//4
Now Lemme Tell You, Im A 'Fact', But To You, You Think Im 'NON' Fiction//5 (Thinkin Non fiction means not real)

You Aint Got 'Shit' On Me, Just Like You Bein 'Constipated'//6
Just Like 'Sour Milk', All Yo Rhymes Are Too 'Out Dated'//7

Just Like A 'Deaf' Kid, You Only Wish You Could 'Talk'//8
But You Got Too Much 'Beef', So You Keep Yo 'Words' In 'Stock'//9

--Finisher--

Im Not Ashamed Of Anything I Might Of 'Confined'//10
Cuz Even If You 'Washed' My 'Marks', We Could Never Be 'Tide'//11




Sorry went over one....Not a Bigge Right? Hope Not.....

Im out....

Votes..... please....

Drop A Link, I will Return the Favor

this line blew me away:

Just Like A 'Deaf' Kid, You Only Wish You Could 'Talk'//8
But You Got Too Much 'Beef', So You Keep Yo 'Words' In 'Stock'//9

that was sick slik had good punches and overall good structure......................................... .................................................. ......

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.TCS.

haha thanks man............................................... .................................................. ..........

Slik took this one with a nicer structure and punches, nicer wordplay adn flow,nice try tho GunRunna
u had some nice lines mixed in ur verse

vote - Slik

hit this up with a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66195
thx

nice drop slik, jus like i fgured im prolly gonna
get merked but its all good, all respect to ya
playa, mad props to ya skill man....................
.................................. good luck to ya in the future.
pz

^^^ummm...slik is a girl... whenever you see an Ill Seductions sig then it probably meanz that the person with possesion of it is a female... but anywayz...I think she got you dog...gunrunna you hot but not a vet yet...start off by battlin' newbiez cause if you try o start off with vets then chancez are ya record ain't gonna look good...

vote slik.....better put together and punches were better......jsut put the whole thing together good and good flow..........so vote=slik.......

thanks..........................Please poll vote......................................if you can...................................

aiight slik gets this one thro some nice wordplay but i think disses went to gunrunna jus that he nearalised his disses with ones that didn't make no sense...nice battle on both parts...gunrunna jus elevate...oNe

vote-slik

yo can you hit up my battle wit bash HONESTLY...thanx

hm...gunrunna need i say more?????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???