Verse 1:

Poppin' slugs and hollowpoint bulletes/
If you got a gat u best ta pull it/
Cool it with your non-sense/
When you fuck with one the whole crew will commence/
The only thing your name will be remembered in is past-tense/
I'm the present, and shadows will lurk over your presence/
So now its the cause of your dissapperance/
Your mamma gets called at 1 in the morning/
When she finds out the news she breaks down and starts mourning/
She finally reaches the mortuary/
Identifys the toe-tag, the next day its in the obituary/
Primary suspect, Tha_Slow_Pain/
Shattered dreams and tears, brings fears, at the funeral it was pouring down acid rain/
Mom's praing that the killer gets caught/
But the next target is her self, distraught gut feelings, realizing the pain will be brought/
Mamma best to stress, I'll lay your ass to rest/
Crest of the mortal demon on my chest/
Shotgun to your stomache right before you black out the feelings like you was high on sess/
Blood gushing out of her back thats when the cops crept up forom the back/
But im ready for the sneak attack/
Ya put a test to your life, youll never get to see your kids and wife/
But I will (knife noise) the die by the fuckin' knife/

Chourse:
It's a horror story, It's a horror story(story)
Blood and guts you got no nuts or glory(glory) repear it 4 times..

if you wanna hear the rest just tell me but this is so you know what the hell is up.......

Before I Rate This - Whats "Acid Rap"??

yea what is iit man

yeah wat is acid rap i dont know maybe its something will anywayz i liked your verse give it 7/10 needs to be longer

im thinking this is some kind of a ritual kinda thing that u do when ur on acid....LOL

but thats my opinion...ill criticize this tomorrow...im soo tired to break them down and give my conrtuctive critism...


but yeah explain whats acid rain....im very willing to be enlightened.

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ok,

Acid rap is a style ESHAM, its rap with a twiztid type to it.....

look up esham