aight no more den 10 linez u spit first

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this is da real one

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aite..ill have my verse in bout 15 mins..aite..post right after mines.....................no feeding either-----------------------------

quik key..jus feel like flowin

it'll take two to dis me,but either way my loss coloumn's ur 'future' /
either that or a wrinkled white man still dissin kids on computers!/
but I guess ur fit for the comp, I punch key's & I land a few/
woah!! easy faggot, im only grabbin ur ass to hand it to you!!/
Watch this bitch spit a shitty ass verse,then this fag is proud of it/
finding your parents is easy, just look, they're wearin the same outfit!/
this cat's a joke,you'll get k.o.d, get urself ready for the take down/
'explained votes' arent needed, the next verse is gonna be the "BreakDown"!/
look at this gay clown,u like 2 flip scripts, ill do better and flip ya name/
ASS-IN-ASS when u take the 'MC' out of this kids shitty mainframe/

Looks like there’s another wannabe, on da brink
U must be from jersey cuz ur verse fuckin stinks
This aint even a contest just to let u kno
When ur in bed with bubba is the only time u have ‘xtreme flow’
Ur raps r elementary talking about pee-pee’s and poo-poo
Shit u fuck wit me again and I’ll leave u looking see-through
I put one in ur dome, took u to church to get u baptized
a catholic priest wouldn't touch u, they said homos gave em bad vibes
Ima take u too my homies, and get u double teamed
Shit dawg ur bloods ‘flows’ like a river, I guess its kinda ‘xtreme’

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aight uppin this shit

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dont sleep on dis

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just drop a link and i'll holla bak at ya. peace easy

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Both rhymes were surprisingly good despite being so short.

Flow came pretty good, but he seemed to be stuck on the gay topic and didn't hit as hard as he sould have.
His closer was tight though.

Assassin came a bit better, but why, oh why, do ya'll keep using pee pee and poo poo in ya rhymes?
Stop it!!!
Still, I think overall he was better and his closer was even nicer and hit harder than Flows.

Assassin for the win.

Cuz everything else is about the same as far as flow, wordplay, personals, and metas.

It came down to punches and the closer.

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thanx for da vote just drop a link and i'll holla bak at ya

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i only used 1 gay line..it wasnt even a bar..so how was i stuck on the gay topic???.......................................... ..

just cuz i call him a fag its not a gay line..i consider being called a fag just a name call..i dont consider it a gay line..

word^^^^

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Originally posted by Born To Kill
Both rhymes were surprisingly good despite being so short.

Flow came pretty good, but he seemed to be stuck on the gay topic and didn't hit as hard as he sould have.
His closer was tight though.

Assassin came a bit better, but why, oh why, do ya'll keep using pee pee and poo poo in ya rhymes?
Stop it!!!
Still, I think overall he was better and his closer was even nicer and hit harder than Flows.

Assassin for the win.

Cuz everything else is about the same as far as flow, wordplay, personals, and metas.

It came down to punches and the closer

same of my idea short battle

aight thanx for da votes still need some more votes

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