Aight lets go

Rules:
Feeble spits first
10-20 lines
no hate votes
no d/r votes
no crew votes

Good luck homie....we rep the same crew but yea

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I'll post tomorrow afternoon
Good luck feeble
no hate homie
juss battle
Nothin said is ta be takin seriously

aight juss waiting on Feeble............................................ ................
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yo...

...warm up...
comin into this battle with no-plan...watch this prick get his hopes-slammed//
cuz i hate faggots...and he 'CHECKS MALE PACKAGES' like the 'POST-MAN'//
lyrics 'heat his insides' like a 'slow tan' and 'light em up' like a glow-lamp!//
give him another try and watch the blowed-chance like its a-flowed-scam//

...next...
sumone help...this kids just untalented, give his spirits-a-lift//
cuz 'around christmas' is the only time you'll 'hear of his gifts'//
he's got a battle style like 'JEWISH HOLIDAYS' cuz cats 'PASS- OVER' his lyrics//
its like he needs 'PRACTICE HARPOONING' cuz its not improving his 'SPEAR-ITS'// (spirits) (lol)

merk time...
him winning is only 'ON THE HORIZON' like distant 'CLAPS OF THUNDER'//
i laugh-at-his-blunder...im above ya lyrically...ya raps is under//
im wishin his-throat-was-mute...cuz ima 'PICTURE HIS DEATH' like a 'PHOTO-SHOOT'//
if i was to quote-this-fruit id have to go he route to say "men are cute"// 12

finisher...
im a heavyweight fightin-a-light...and ya better wtch what ya write cuz we all know lit-fuses aint slow-to-ignite//
minds-get-incite...cuz im on a 'HARD DRIVE' to pack 'MEGA' punches and im quite quick to 'BYTE'// (computer references) 16

...the end... ....of you...
the end of you, death, destruction...the pattern is it all relates to you losing//
we all know he's gotta 'LOOK AT THE END' and 'FACE THE CONCLUSION'//
if you was once dope...we all know it was drugs u was using//
im verbally abusing and hes takin a bruising//

aite ...ur turn...

nice
i'm juss bout done
give me like a couple minutes.....
PROPS Feeble
no hate
u still my boy!

Here we go

I'm battlin a fool that's on the Top 10 list dont matta cuz in a battle i'll beat him with my flows or my fist, My flows be Ambitious this nigga gay he think i'm magically delicious//
We rep the same crew Lethal Connections this like a campain i'm winnin the elections, damn feeble you Alliderate i'm the number one confederate//
I'm gone win this battle with hand down gettin 5 votes from niggas all around, I'm the illest as you can see battle me you wont be as intellegent as me//
Your punchlines i had prevented my punches so hard you can't be protected, I'm the Merking King you like mariah carey you can't rap all u can do is sing//
I'm never gonna be beat by any of you cunts i'll burn all ya'll like me and my nigga crysis was smokin some blunts, my flows are hard some what exquizit i'm gonna beat you feeble so dont be afraid come visit//
Right now you prolly think you hated but honestly when ya step against me wit a mic i'll leave ya faded, see you like Osama Bin Ladin ya committin terrors battlin me that was ya first error//
Ya spittin stuff thats not relavent how ya gone diss me when ya not Intellagent, Battlin me ya got ripped, ya had a title but it juss got stripped//
Your daily rutein is prolly to watch Richard simmons Nigga i'll leave you confused u be like why's his rims keep spinnin, My flows be Untouchable ya verse is so wack it's not even helpable//
Right now yo ass got writers block dont worry bout it cuz ya wont be albe ta write when i cock my glock, you like those internet porn sites so damn sick you cause cyber fights//
See me and niggas like doin Collaborations Feeble Minded think he got talent what high Imaginations, Sorry feeble but we battlin by the way how does it feel that ya brains are rattlin?//
Ya screen name is BlackJack damn dawg i aint kno u was that wack, dont think to hard ya might hurt yaself Damn i should put ya verse on the wackest shelf//
Damn you wack ya verse makes me mad man i could beat you in a battle if i wrote a verse on the back of my hand, Battlin me is a bad decision it's pretty self explanitory pickin me ta battle was the worst move ya could make manditory//
Your Winning record i'm shutting down ya bout as wack as a teacher teachin Proper nouns, Ya time ta post got extended i kno u got mad bout what i'm sayin but dont get affended//
This nigga bout as gay as Inspector Gadget a dumb trench coat wearin faggit, see you are on my hit list listed i'm the Merking King dont get it twisted//
See i'm merkin you leavin u dissmissed i kno ya gone read my verse and then ya gone be pissed, but no hate homie props if i kno if i merk you to bad you'll prolly be gay and call da cops//
Feeble to bad if i got u Embarrassed but hey now u kno what it's like ta be ya parents, Juss playin you kno u my dawg but i'd still merk you even if i couldn't see in a FOG//
Damn you a virgin you aint eva even seen a thong Feeble ya think ya gone win this battle you got it all wrong, Sorry but this time ya punches got rejected maybe next time they will be accepted//
I kno your pretty new to rejection but honestly dawg my verses come out 110% Perfection, I'm not underestimating you i'm juss momentously defeating you//
Feeble wonder if ya still wanna be friends it's not that bad my verse was better times 10, i'm juss bringing out my skill because my flows bazarre and kill//
Fuck it before you battled me you shoulda been Kautious cuz my flows are sick they'll leave ya nautious, I probly left you amazed you probly wish your verse could get rephrazed//

nice verse man...

voters,,,,,vote....
vote for best verse not length that dont mater.................>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>..>

Word
Props to ya feeble
this was a good battle

Flow... Merking..
Wordplay... Feeble..
Punches... Feeble..
Creativity... Merking..
Personals... Tie..
Metas... Merking
Comedy... Feeble..
Imagery... Merking..


Right enough categories... This battle was truely ill, damn mad props ta both of ya'll... extremely close..... too close..... shits scaring me ta vote....... goin on categories..... Merking got it, and when i say by a hair strand, i mean that, was really shit close all tha way....... nice work guys......
vote: merking

Damn this was some close shit.. Merking King is starting to get up there... feeble sorry bro but Merking took this battle
vote-Merking King

Sureal: This Will Not Count, Not Explained Well Enough*

yo....>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>...


yall are just copying others shit....
some fair votes please?

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use ya own thoughts...yall are pissin me off..................

yea
write your exact opinion
dont quote
Uppin 3-0 my lead.
Props to ya Feeble

lets get some more votes

Feeble u a herb
lol juss playin with ya homie
you kno i'm juss fuckin round
but yo lets get some votes

Holy shit i didn't think Merking King would do this good
he got my vote
sorry feeble for the quote
but youngwhitethug19 took words out of my mouth

Sureal: This Will Also Not Count, Due To Quoting, And Not Being Well Explained

after reading through the verses i came to the
conclusion that there is no way merking won this
hobos eat germ infested fly habitats called garbage
that is what i compare merking kings verse to. and
please some one get these voters a band aid because
his dick is so far up their ass you know it's bleeding.
i'm closing this poll and resetting it to 0-0 cuz thats some
bullshit, i'll reopen the thread so you post mongers
can free post and bitch at me until you get banned . pz

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