ok 10 lines roughly
30 mins from now.
first to 5
3-o = KO

My name alone is much too much for you to handle
all fingers and no thumbs so you can't even hold a candle
To this homicidal idol I stop vitals in madd men
your verse was severely holed and more porous than lambskin
So your infected with the wackness and you can't seem to shake it
I'll defeat you even spitting at just 1 percent of my apex
Which is more than enough to render you free from speeches
you become freakishly speechless and aromaticaly wreak of weakness
I've already killed you
compared to my intellect you're a gorilla
ya whole verse was suspect and my last bar was iller
Than anything you've ever bitten
written or spitten word
I cop over your littered text and comence to shit turds
You're obsurd every word
but you beef with this feindish animal
and your name mixed with skill makes less sense than vegan cannibles
In battle mode there's no friends as I spank you repeatedly
then afterwards hug my chil'ren cause I just sonned you easily
You've no skill and half a mind
who told you you could rhyme
now you're as embarressed as being spotted in a cheese line
Exposed!!!!!!
Suspended long term memory since you wasn't up to slay me
and I'll remind you how I crushed your feeble ass on the daily.

that way you'll never forget this.......

sorry but that verse blatantly wasnt written for me was it. prewritten no doubt

ok anyway


beat me?... hardly...you and whos army?//
for a starters, i see that your new to RB//
your verse wasnt freestyled, not even partly//
no mention of me and your speach worst than Arny//
If you ever threw a hard punch it would make your wrist snap//
I'll be laughing at your mishap watchin your fist smack back -//
- to your forearm. why did you enter this forum//
i came to entertain peeps and you jus bore 'em//
leave em snorin with your blatant written verses//
my words leave you sensless like im rippin purses//
and the worst is, you are as fake as womens wrestlin//
with every disease known to man you couldnt be the illest specimen//

what eva dude

only a pussy who know's he lost would say somthing like that


i had over half of that finished befor i ieven battled you

everybody preps their shit
befor posting'
So ok anyway nice prewritten pal





see it sucks right just what eva lets let the people decide

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SyniKiLL-

-decent intro... kinda soft though but good flow.
-second bar was okay... but again kinda soft.
-middle of verse had great flow and i could read it well
-some of your lines are short... but they flow well
-good closer

Manik P-

-the fact that you cry about your opponents verse makes you look bad.
-you are feeding off his verse... and you didnt flip it well at all
-good flow... but lacking punches and wordplay
-your ending was not very good either... you lacked punches in this vers.

^^^ i dont really think SyniKill's verse was pre-written...

Vote: SyniKill

w00ps i am sorry... i cannot do a Poll Vote until i get to 100 posts. My bad guys i am sorry. i will get going and make some more posts on the regular forums and then vote more when i can. sorry agian!!!!!!!

syn you took him out
your punches and flow are always on
this guy was out of your relm

check out honest votes only

str8 vs jack tha rippa
srt8 vs gunnrunna need to close this shit out

hey poll vote jacket
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synikill got it, Manik P you just gotta keep working on your battles, aight

VOTE=SYNIKILL

check out my battle and drop an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67538

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lets get this closed

i wanna battle some mo but cant til they closed
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