...or should be....
...could be lackin lie
i'm packin' vibes that feel like smack inside the vein /
attackin like cane, crackin mic strains
i'm like ultram to migraines, my games to kill pain
with a cold hand crushin pill grains, disruptin brains like dust in distilled flame
my frames ill/ the same as Narcotic Anonmyous grills
throw my heart poppin into a sarcophagus, sarcastic commentator of skills
common taster of qualudes/
congreator at chronic conventions
spray through pneumonic suspenions with too much kharma ta mention
calmin ya' crews tensions with kinda abused inventions
i'm a rhyma whose true assentions come out on blue pops
blast due props in your ass like flu shots
'flow on grass' like dew drops, i'm too hot
I need some ice and a slice of life that i can light in my pipe
I spit what i seen in my life
skull chunks from riflin tongue travelin
high off adderal and ritalin medicine tablets, babblin malevolent madness
rippin levers and magnets off plastic measurin packages
past flipped, i'm the rebelin' ravengin' kid
smackin treble in cats cabbages, captured caspers spat backwardness
like acid hits, and psylocibin caps in lids
i'm actin id, ego, superego simultaneously
lines of latency sniffed into my mind makin me
rhyme, takin me to the sky off designs of deceny
i'm the linguistic leader leisurely
eatin needles of G.H.B, "JEZE H C!!!!!!!", da each of ya equally hate each of me???
that right there's three of me, esteemed emcees fiendeshly fightin' features
of refer madnesses and grim reepers,
i'm the gate keeper to spin teachers
sin's teachers
for all you kids, my leisures assend only to my pleezures
so, be easy, ........ and don't eat this!!!!!!

yo im feeling this the context wordplay punches and structure blended well tight drop

same as wrd feelin this,good,content,wordplay,basically jus a good drop.

yo i was feelin this i enjoyed and i liked it

Some mo feedback please

Thanxxx

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