this is just something me and some of my homies threw together.but we are going to re-do it ,and take out the white boys that sing in the begging

it goes
[1st] ....steve
[hook].... me
[2nd].... me
[hook] ....me
[3rd] .... jose
[hook] .... me
[4th] ... carlos

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beat is nice but a little too loud. i actually think the singing part part works with it. the hook is dope, the lyrics are good from what i can hear and well paced and well delivered.

lol, your voice is almost as deep as mine, wanna collab?

thanks for the reply, maybe we could do a colab later i dont haver the time right now...

i should have put the name on it so people dont think its a song about freeposting LOL

yo c, i wasnt completely feeling ths drop...idk why, but i honestly think with the hook where you go "standng in a ran storm" i thnk it will sound a bit better if you dont say storm, just sng "standng in the rain"...i gotta admit your voice kinda caught me off guard, i kinda pictured your voice as a..well..not as deep, still a tight voice

overall: 7.1/10

YO, Your voice is stupid deep, CRAZY DEEP, like your lungs were the size of a fucking drum, The shit was that, Hit us with that picture of a Hispanic with an OK voice, and then BOOM, You turn off the Treble and Just Turn up the bass. But on the track, I don't think the beat was found by some of them at some times. You should redo it. GJ anyway.

........you know what they say...........people with real deep voices.......can deep throat the best...lol...

Was Ok... Funny For Drunken Producing Etc...

i like the beat..1st guy was dope..ur voice was good for the hook and u had a a good verse
3rd guy needs to come abit harder he sounded kinda bored, peace

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thanks for the replys, we are going to redo it later

Not really feeling this to much to be honest with you the beat is alright but I didn't feel the verses to much

when you remake it make sure the vocals come up. your flow is kinda like biggie. your voice is too. after you and steve spit it shoulda ended ahha

the beat was koo but i wasnt feeling the verses

You voice would be coo if you worked on your presence. But I
didnt feel it.

what werent you feeling about it? i just want to know so i could imporve on it.

Mainly the presense dawg. Your voice is actualy dope, you just
dont sound comfortable in front of the mic. Flow was str8 tho.

Cise