BLuNT---> "hey ummm, can I bum a smoke... 25 cents."
"no..? a'ight 50 cents.. no.. man I ain't got that kinda money..."
I'm broke as fuck, no luck with employment, every career I get I destroy it
spoil it like breakfast this morning, laid off with out a warning
FORGET A PENTION.. the welfare office can't afford that..
or a cheque for that matter, food stamps are like gold man
right now I'm surviving on chrome, stolen merchandise from merchant heists
I never observe a price, If I need something bad enough I'll burn ya life
hell, I'd do it for a dime, a nickel or a little piece-a street meat
(clip from simpsons when homer's at world trade towers)
"Get your krevkalash..." (GUN SHOT)
I got that, get popped for your 5 cent pop can
you got an empty 40 bottle I want that, it's a quarter return
that's all I can earn, I'm the hobo in ya hood
even the hood rats wont come over to my room,
an' then there's the alley rats, well, call me an alley cat
'cause I set a trap, lit a fire an' I'm try'n to gain' some fat
even the homeless shelter tells me to stay out back..
I neeeeeed money BAAAAAAD MAAAAAN

HOOK: if not having money-is funny-im the KING of comedy-
if we live for what we earn im dead with no property-
BLUNT (DAWG IM BROKE AS FUCK)
CENTZ (IM FUCKED BY LUCK)
either way the topic is can i barrow a buck

WORDPERFECT(SARACSM)
growing up.....
home was a consentration camp-covered in FUCK JOo's_ (FUCK YOU AND JEWS
MIXEDD)
a broke spic paying off hood rats-
crack fiend PROSTITUTES-
in food stamps-
no father me and my broke mother-
guess we destined to be poor im a product cause he couldnt afford the
rubber-
HANES..... underwear recycled 3 generations urine yellow color-
sleeping in beds one grandmother and 5 brothers-
hand me downs for christmas-handing suicide notes postage due for SANTAS
WISH LIST-
but i lived to regret it-
shit we were so bad off we was rejected- twice fo gov cheese do tor lack of
WELFARE~CREDIT-
slim chance- to adavance-16 the only kid in school KRISS kROSSing HAMMER
PANTS-
lacked soap what's the point it's worthlesss-dreadlochs looking like they
were done on purpose-
no brighter day-i just sold both kidneys they the last arterries i can
auction on E~BAY-
sad life of a nomad looken for food loaners-
societies peasent cant afford to be an organ donar-
brain damage thought disturbance-
fake my death to collect and instead added a debt on health insurance-\
FUCK!

HOOK: if not having money-is funny-im the KING of comedy-
if we live for what we earn im dead with no property-
BLUNT (DAWG IM BROKE AS FUCK)
CENTZ (IM FUCKED BY LUCK)
either way the topic is can i barrow a buck

Master Blaster

Stuck inside the mind of mad man with no equal opportunity
Fuck a human
A demon inside words and my lips speak fluently
I have no life, no job plus no money
So push me…Over the edge
You wake up with a few spinal discs missin
With your cerebrum runnin away slowly from your head
Your skullz busy oozin gristle
While you’re facial features are busy digestion pistols and missiles
This individual has no principals…Feel my wrath when I feeling miserable
Looking pitiful…Like a small child with a wet face
Nasty…How’s the gun powder and hot lead taste
Your life form gets erased…Fuck a map
Off of geography
So push me…Then watch me…Leave a fuckin mess
Take the blades from your shoulders
Then carve a crucifx in your fuckin chest

HOOK: if not having money-is funny-im the KING of comedy-
if we live for what we earn im dead with no property-
BLUNT (DAWG IM BROKE AS FUCK)
CENTZ (IM FUCKED BY LUCK)
either way the topic is can i barrow a buck

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lol...this was a pretty good/funny piece. the chorus was the shit..

Blunt you lacked a little bit on the vocab but you still shined on this.

I got that, get popped for your 5 cent pop can
you got an empty 40 bottle I want that, it's a quarter return

^your best line in this..

Word-i thought that you stole this show.. your verse was the most comical and had the best flow overall..

brain damage thought disturbance-
fake my death to collect and instead added a debt on health insurance-\
FUCK!

^^lol...lifes a bitch.


Master- it seemed to me that you drifted off the topic and that took away from the overall quality. but, your vocab and flow was the best here..

So push me…Then watch me…Leave a fuckin mess
Take the blades from your shoulders
Then carve a crucifx in your fuckin chest

^^your best moment


overall i think that your 3 styles went well together and this was a quality piece...

7.5/10

now hit my first topical up yall

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67605

Thank You

I Wasn't In The Original Version

So Thank You WP

He Called Me Into Work And I Got The Job Done (i think)

Sorry If It Was Rushed...Didn't Know What They Were Rapping
About - Being Poor I Take It

I'll Make Sure To Return The Favor

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lol... whatever, you came good still.. and yea the topic was about being poor... I wondered how your verse fit in... uppin'

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This collab was Nice....First of all , Blunt-mc had sick wordplay . But No vocab , Vocab was what blunt Lacked , Second of all WORD~PERFECT had da best verse , he had nice wordplay , but he kinda lacked vocab , he's rhyme Scheme was tight , I liked his verse , 4 sho , Master Blaster could have did better , But he still had an good verse , overall i give this collab a 7.8/10 , Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67799

Thanks Again

Sorry For Not Fitting It

Maybe I Should Of Took The Time To Read The Other Verses

Word Wanted It Done Pretty Quickly So Blah

I'll Return The Favor Bash - One Second Please

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Shiznit's Thoughts:

On Blunt-MC's verse

VOCABULARY/WORDPLAY

>alright...the intro was actually good. It made me wanna read to the end. You used really simplistic terms that made the whole verse attached to every line. I agree with Bash and D...the very construction of vocabs lacked at some point where u could actually substitute some other words for it. If u coudve made the whole terminology interesting...it would be much better.

FLOW/RHYME SCHEME

>you showed the idea of refining each line to perfectly fit the flow. It was smooth but off with a bit of fragmentation at some parts that made the flow slid a little. I read it a couple of times actually and it wasnt that bad because of the rhyme scheme used. Props for that.

CONTENT

>very well thought out...your verse reflected the fact that you actually know what ur talking about and not just thrown out words that dont even make sense. youve made ur verse quitely understandable...well done!

On WORDPERFECT's verse

VOCABULARY/WORDPLAY

>very well chosen words coming from you. You've mixed a bunch of terms with some level of grossness but brilliant!
(i.e."HANES..... underwear recycled 3 generations urine yellow color-")...uhhh..okay enough of that ..but u got to the part where u can almost pinpoint the whole insanity slashed reality of being poor. Reluctantly..the fact that uve made the picked vocabs outcasted some of the plain words that u used.

FLOW/RHYME SCHEME

>fits smoothly...the whole sense of matter reading all throughout showed that it was executed well and turned out to be the best verse from the rest....Well one or two lines kinda turned the other way but u made it turn back so that it flows the same again.

CONTENT

>The whole theme was fantastic. The inside basis of the piece depicted the outside incentive that made it really interesting to read. Motivated contents really outburst the fact that it was realistic. nice job!


On Master Blaster's verse

VOCABULARY/WORDPLAY

>a couple of metas thrown out here and there. Terms were used hardly enough to recreate something out of it. Incredible decision of combining such words with a bit of excitement. Some are a bit confusin but i read it a few times then i realized some of the constructed words were meant to be there.

FLOW/RHYME SCHEME

>definitely on it. It seems to me that uve considered using some technique but i dont know maybe im wrong that made ur verse stood out. It was smooth..from top to the end...well done.

CONTENT

>hmmm...ur kinda off the point but if u like put ur ideas all together and sum it up...it would prolly head the same way as the other guys's main point. Luckily, it amused me. Got me all interested whats inside ur mind...quite frankly..i dont want to but for some reason those words came out strongly.


OVERALL

hmmm...i really liked this one...three individuals ideas and concepts combined. pretty amazing!..it was fun readin it.

well i dont really rate open mics so all i can say to this is

DOPE!...<------hope thats enough for u master blaster...

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<br><br><center>- Shiznit -
- Tampons are still expensive -
- That's a Fact - </center>

Got me all interested whats inside ur mind

^^^A Lot Of Evil - LoL

Thank You

Dope - Maybe - Just Helping A Friend Out

Yo WP Where U At?

Shit Got Posted And You Aint Here To Commment

O Well

I Really Don't Do Open Mics Anymore But Ya Know

On The Grind

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uppin

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Plain and simple... the shit was ill. Ill chorus, Ill verses, Ill wordplay, and Ill concept... doesn't get much better than that.

seeeeen... thx, uppin'

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THNKS TO THOSE THAT PEEPED I WAS USING THIRSTON HOWLS FLOW PATTERN FOR THIS I THOUGHT IT WOULD OF HARDER TO UNDERSTAND BUT THE FACT IT ALMOST FITS MAKES ME HAPPY.I DONT HAVE ANYDISAPOINTMENT IN THIS BLUNT WENT ABOVE AND BEYOND FOR ME MASTER BLASTER WAS GIVEN A LIL BIT OF TIME TO PULL WHAT HE DID AND UNDERPRESSURE HE DID WODERFUL.IM HAPPY THAT I FOUND THE RIGHT M.C.'S TO PULL THIS OFF AND HOPE I CAN WORK WITH THEM MORE IN THE FUTURE.

another good collab
enjoyable to read....
blunt started it off with a nice flow stayed on point and also some nice imagery kinda shit lol
word....had the best verse in my opin ion...liked the dreadlocks line and a few others...good flow and some good comedy as well
urine stained underwear<lol
master blaster was abit off topic but generally the whole thing went well together and the hook was good as well
8/10

FGEE I KNOW YOU FROM SOMEWHERE WERE YOU EVER ON BATTLEBOARDS OR LYRICAL WARFARE

might be
im mainly on this site though
^and if u could peep my collab with rythmic
would be appreciated