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natural_disaster 1 25.00%
triztwarrior 3 75.00%
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Old 07-23-03, 07:43 PM   #1
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Battle: Triztwarrior Vs Natural_Disaster

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Here are the rules:
10 lines max,
No hate, d/r or crew votes,
No prewrittens
Ill spit first
 
Old 07-23-03, 07:59 PM   #2
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right lad u spit am ready for it

try go easy as am new to dis shit lad mind it wont matta i still kick ass lol (just using 100 characters lol)
 
Old 07-23-03, 07:59 PM   #3
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Hey yo,
Naturally a disaster//You're so damn slow, could I flow any faster?//Looks like this prick pricked himself, lemme get you a plaster//You expected a newbie, you got the fuckin master//Grab a pistol, and into submission I'll start to blast//In a minute you're gonna need a whole body cast//Your style is embarassing, its so stale, you've failed//Get yo ass back to Wales, you like a beached whale//All you can do it flail, from this boat named the Rap, you should bail//Open my sails, let them billow, sail towards ya//Comin to kill ya, start to bellow, im gettin iller//
Next time ill finish ya :P
 
Old 07-23-03, 08:01 PM   #4
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I went sortof easy on ya lol, but I dont doubt ur skills I dont think i really needed to ...................................(dam this 100character rule! I h8 it so badly lol).............................................. .......
 
Old 07-23-03, 08:12 PM   #5
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lol @ the 100 character thingy, good rhymes lad

OK OK OK OK LISTEN LISTEN

me 5yr old sis got more skill//
you betta take note of ma flow its so fuckin ill//
better go grab urself a beer your not gunna like this//
if i'd have used protection you wouldn't even be ere i regret the first kiss//
get your mum sum rub she'll even let u ave her up da fuckin bum//
your rhymes are fucking wank//
mine are that tight they're blowing you away like a fuckin tank//
i might be new to this//
check it out im totaly taking da fucking piss//
 
Old 07-23-03, 08:14 PM   #6
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Trizt took this

Better dissing

Nt disaster needs a lil elevating but he still learnin da ropes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67759


Vote goes to triz warrior
 
Old 07-23-03, 08:16 PM   #7
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hey yo,
thats some okay stuff u pulled there i guess
PS tell your five year old sis daddy is ashamed of her from me (dont worry Natural you'll figure wat i said out someday :P)
 
Old 07-23-03, 08:19 PM   #8
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synikill : : Yeah am still learning this shit lad soz i aint as good as you lot but as i said im startin ere so i'll get betta with time

Triztwarrior : : Soz mate but i think my lines where iller am new to this shit but whateever good battle dawg
 
Old 07-23-03, 08:23 PM   #9
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nah man

natural you need to elevate
seriously....


acctualy it wasn't a bad battle....

you both need elevation

vote-triz
he had a better verse over all
but i didnt like your structure
cruise the bords and look around
this isn't much of a game
people acctualy spit sensibol lines on this site
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Old 07-23-03, 08:26 PM   #10
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lol okay Kautious ill work on incorporatin some more relevant lines in my shit thanks for the feedback
 
Old 07-23-03, 08:26 PM   #11
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kautious thanks for the advice man, i'll have a look round gimme some ideas like, again sorry about earlier lol actin a prick 'n' all
 
Old 07-23-03, 08:36 PM   #12
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uppin for votes ************************************************** ************************************************** ****
 
Old 07-23-03, 09:02 PM   #13
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yo
Natural u have 4 unfinished (or somethin like that) battles happenin right now, just a warnin; ur only allowed two unclosed battles happenin at one time. be careful dawg

Peace Out
 
Old 07-23-03, 09:05 PM   #14
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shit i didnt know that shit dawg nobody told me like

nooooooo i lost them all anyways but i dont wanna piss no peeps off like hopefuly it will go un-noticed

peace out
 
Old 07-24-03, 08:34 AM   #15
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Uppin for votes......................................come on ppl! vote plz someone needs to win this battle............................................ .......................................
 
 


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