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Old 07-25-03, 06:49 AM   #1
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"What is Ur Love Version!"

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Yo i did also an open mic about it ft Chynadoll it came out tight

but i wanted to go deeper and it being i while i dropped any Poetic thoughts feel me..lol

here i go..............


THE ORIGINAL VERSION:
If you love something,
Set it free...
If it comes back, it's yours,
If it doesn't, it never was yours....

THE PESSIMIST VERSION:
If you love somebody,
Set her free ...
If she ever comes back, she's yours,
If she doesn't, well, as expected, she never was.

THE OPTIMIST VERSION:
If you love somebody,
Set her free ...
Don't worry, she will come back.

THE IMPATIENT VERSION:
If you love somebody,
Set her free ...
If she ever comes back, ask her why.

THE SUSPICIOUS VERSION:
If you love somebody,
Set her free ...
If she doesn't comes back within some time limit,
forget her.

THE PATIENT VERSION:
If you love somebody,
Set her free ...
If she doesn't come back, continue to wait
until she comes back ...

THE PLAYFUL VERSION:
If you love somebody,
Set her free ...
If she comes back, and if you love her still,
set her free again, repeat

THE BILL GATES VERSION:
If you love somebody,
Set her free...
If she comes back,
I think we can charge her for re-installation fees
and tell her that she's also going to get an upgrade.

THE STATISTICIAN'S VERSION:
If you love somebody,
Set her free...
If she loves you, the probability of her coming back is high
If she doesn't, your relationship was improbable anyway.

THE POSSESSIVE VERSION:
If you love somebody
don't ever set her free.

THE PSYCHOLOGIST'S VERSION:
If you love somebody
set her free...
If she comes back, her super ego is dominant
If she doesn't come, back her id is supreme
If she doesn't go, she must be crazy.

THE FINANCE EXPERT VERSION:
If you love somebody
set her free...
If she comes back, its time to look for fresh loans.
If she doesn't, write her off as an asset gone bad.

THE MARKETING VERSION:
If you love somebody
set her free...
If she comes back, she has brand loyalty
If she doesn't, reposition the brand in new markets

THE BUSH VERSION:
If you love somebody
set her free...
If she comes back, shoot her down
If she doesn't, shoot her down


Wut ya'll think???...........it came out creative...lol
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Old 07-25-03, 04:52 PM   #2
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OOOH LORD DAMN THEE.....SLEEPERSSSSSSSSSSSs..lol
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Old 07-26-03, 01:07 PM   #3
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I LIKED THAT SHIT NIGGUH LOTS OF PROPS KEEP IT UP .................................................. ........................
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Old 07-26-03, 01:31 PM   #4
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U should have named it "What is Ur Love Version!"(Remix)
Because this look's like da remix too ur original one wit Chynadoll
I will give u feedback later
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Old 07-26-03, 05:59 PM   #5
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Thanks Bash and the other guy

I apreciate ya'll feedbacks..........and yea is the REMIX

lol

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Old 07-26-03, 06:07 PM   #6
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this was nice....i like how you gave lodsa views.....wasnt wat i normally have seen but it was a nice idea and was interesting to read.....LOL bush thing made me laugh.......

nice stuff mayneeeeeeeee
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Old 07-27-03, 06:23 AM   #7
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LOOL YA BUSH...

Thanks dawg UPPUN
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Old 07-27-03, 03:35 PM   #8
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hahaha nice drop fam......
Really Enjoyed Reading It.........
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Old 07-27-03, 03:57 PM   #9
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Creative indeed. Mad original. I liked it.
I thought the
IMPATIENT VERSION and the SUSPICIAN VERSION should have been reversed tho:

THE IMPATIENT VERSION:
If you love somebody,
Set her free ...
If she ever comes back, ask her why.

THE SUSPICIOUS VERSION:
If you love somebody,
Set her free ...
If she doesn't comes back within some time limit,
forget her.

If you're suspicious of her, wouldnt you ask her why?
and if you're impatient, wouldnt you say forget her?
nice piece tho.
Stay up.
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Old 07-28-03, 08:26 AM   #10
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^^^YEA I FUCKED IT UP..lol

thanks for correction

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Old 07-30-03, 12:55 AM   #11
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nice drop i liked it all in all nice drop
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