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Old 07-25-03, 02:15 PM   #1
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Thumbs up Restoration

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Chapman Tracy, fast car pace speed, dust in the wind/
Supernova bloomed begonia spin, touch of the pen/
Scraping surface of this earth’s twist, rust to the brim-
On the cup of life, been drunk twice and still lust for a swim/
My last choke back stroke, someday I’ll wade the waves/
For now brother, I’ll drown in the color and shades of gray/
Seems the shapes of clay we crave are on the plates of slaves/
Feeding our bondage, being this honest I date the blade/
Steady the sabers, fate we say? Or we ready the anger/
Of our own evolution, confusing, moving the slate we pave/
With good intentions, beckon the gate sways, in place I lay/
Stuck with these wings, trumping my king with the spades I play/
House of fallen cards, facial displays miming our hollow art/
Erect a home etched in stone, where diamonds swallow hearts/
Shining Apollo dart, drip of sun, beat of a different drum/
I’ll add infinity till I can grasp the energy to be a specific sum-
Body, one star speech, tardy-after-life-party, applaud me/
Traveling-on-time-line-unraveling yarn, gone and godspeed.



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Old 07-25-03, 02:15 PM   #2
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yea i kno this is a new style from the gangsta shit but this is just as raw im feelin this right now holla
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Old 07-25-03, 02:16 PM   #3
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reminicent of wu style of writting i liked it lilo short but tight none the less.hey return the solid.
my tracks out now are THE HIGH ANNOINTED and RAPBATTLES ANTHEM
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Old 07-25-03, 02:20 PM   #4
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ight i will, thanks i think this is fuckin raw amnd i wantr some more feed back

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Old 07-25-03, 02:42 PM   #5
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uppppin
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Old 07-25-03, 02:56 PM   #6
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Old 07-25-03, 04:40 PM   #7
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You're a fucking biter. You bit this of of adinfinit aka Cimmerian.
u fuckin faggot.

here's the link to it. you're from fucking fs.com, yea i'll notify admins there too that u r a biter.

http://www.freestyling.com/board/sh...=&threadid=1664

fucking faggot...
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Old 07-25-03, 04:42 PM   #8
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^^^DAMN ruth is good...lol^^^Emhh like my Minni Mi
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Old 07-25-03, 05:39 PM   #9
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BITING ASS MOTHERFUCKER

Bit my boy Cimmerian over at freestyling.com

when will you small minded faggots learn..if you cant write a verse, dont write one at all...
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Old 07-26-03, 01:09 AM   #10
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Those are some awful big accusations...but If their not true than this was a nice verse it could have made more sense i think though....
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Old 07-26-03, 03:21 PM   #11
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^^ are you fucking stupid? i posted a fucking link u dumbass...cimm is prolly the best online textcee dumbass, peep the fucking link before you post something stupid...
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Old 08-07-03, 11:53 AM   #12
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is he banned yet?
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Old 08-07-03, 12:05 PM   #13
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