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Due: 2morrow
U spit first

you're such a pussy makin me spit first too... How about deadline today because i know you're gonna be writin until you gotta post..

Ok deadline 2day , Muh fucker , Spit first

haha, i'll drop at 12... we're spittin at the same time.. Dont think you're ill............................................... ....

I got a Lead Pencil… When I Write This Stencil Its Poison n Leads To a ‘Deadly-Drop’/
My Hits Medical N Touches Ur Heart, When Da ‘Beats’ Finished ur Lifes Already-Stopped/
So I Smacked You With Each Of Your Lines-And-Verses…Watch The Nine-Surface…
To Blow A Hole Deep In Your Thorax So Your Spine-And-Nerves-could Slip-Out-Of-Ya-Cervix/
D ‘Raised The Fees’ On The ‘Bridge Of The Deceased’…Cuz I’m Increasing The ‘Death-Toll’…
I'll Have Carcuz Chest-Swole…Cuz ‘I Ain't Feelin His Shit’ Like u being paralyzed in ur Leg-Hold'/
This Fag's Ribs "Treble" And his Lips are Tremble When I Provide The "Bass" To His Existence...
Come From Experience…I Blaze With Persistence...Carcuz Goin Down With A "Patient Death" Like Kavorkians Assistants...
That’s Factious-Play…I’ll Have Carcuz ‘Throw-The-Scales’ Cuz He’s Passed-A-Weigh...(Get it)
He Dipped His Head In The Fountain-Of-Youth…Cuz He Was Hopin-For-‘Cure' To 'Age’(Courage)...
Bound-To-Throw Out his Eye-Sores As I Score With Knives-Tore Down ur Spine’s-Cord Till Each Of Your Thighs-Sports A Lined-Scourged...


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please peep on it its bein sleept on real bad...return the favor

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=68448

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

Bash get's wrapped-up-in-plastic and tossed in the back-of-a-casket./
His neck is so snapped-into-"fractions", it takes some "math"-to-assemble-it-back-with.//
My wrath? shit this rebel-can-have-it, leave his verses so hurt the devel's-ecstatic./
just watch as i level-this-faggot, i'll leave him "stuck in a hearse" like a "necro-fanatic"// (necrophilia is when people like to have sex with dead bodies)
I dont do text but i'm makin-expceptions, breakin-his-neck-with my flow, bash should start takin-some-lessons./
he's a disgrace-to-this-text-shit, humiliate him at his own game... that's my blatent-objective//
forced multis and wordplays? this nerd-stays clear of my PUNCHES, if he DOESN'T, he'll end up in first-aid/
his scenario?.. i believe it's the worst-case, this bastard just got "bashed" and i left him a "merked-name"//
why am I ill? cuz i'm in U-T... WHy are you ill? cuz you got sick from gettin booty from an infected blond beauty./
...and yes i know you're fruity so i'm sayin the dude you screw-be screwin other dudes in their poopie.//
get-it?.. your shit-is... not even worth my minutes...i'll rip you with conviction til you're throwin-down-and-quittin./
i'm mowin-down-your-diction-with-ease, stop spittin fictionous,-please, if i were u i'd fuckin quit-in-a-breeze.//
your limits-are-tweaked thinkin you can serve-me, your words-be dumber than the thought of UT merging./
and you know that's dumb when we're running-the-site...i'm comin-tonight, to murder you and your mum-in-delight.//
your shit is random thoughts thrown-together while i am known-forever./
your basis is a set of "copied lines", like the "clone-endeavor".// (copied genetic code/clone, copied text)


I knew that you were shitty reppin B-R-E...maybe one of them will pay your fuckin E-R-Fee/

OKKK breakdown Bash i liked

That’s Factious-Play…I’ll Have Carcuz ‘Throw-The-Scales’ Cuz He’s Passed-A-Weigh...(Get it)
He Dipped His Head In The Fountain-Of-Youth…Cuz He Was Hopin-For-‘Cure' To 'Age’(Courage)...

^^and after that i didnt think the "newbee" would come back BUTTT Carcuz had some good lines.. liked his opener and finisher

Soooo

Flow- Carcuz
Punches- Bash (but it was close)
Wordplay - Tie
Vocab- Tie
Personals- Tie (both had very litte/none)

But i gotta gie it to Bas because punches are more important than Flow to me PLUSS he had like half Carcuz's shit

good battle can your PLEASE return tha favou here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68673

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whats with all the long verses lately?
bash got this because of less filler and strictly ti the point of dissing his opponent n its somethin how you can make a short verse hot

2-0 , But ya all gotta poll vote
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their votes were wrong anyways... Vote this up people............................................ ...................

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I'ma have to vote for Bash on this one because his punches were harder in my opinion. Tight battle you two, keep it up

"whats with all the long verses lately?
bash got this because of less filler and strictly ti the point of dissing his opponent n its somethin how you can make a short verse hot"

what kind of explanation is this? our verses are almost the same length, mine just looks way longer because my lines run over a little bit... His lines are all close to running over..

you gotta vote
wordplay
flow
punches
disses
vocab
multis