suicide machine

i had this dream where i invented this machine
u jus go through it when u seem
that ur life is all a sceam
it will make u scream, i call it the suicide machine
twist u and torqu u, hit u and fork u
kill u in many ways but at 1st it will cork u
cuz we dont want ur shit all over the place
some people might say it a waste of space
but those people are rich and thats not my case
i installed gun knives chains anything to make u cus
our slogan is "u will bust"
so take our trust, the machine will kill u
spit u out it knows what to do
inject clorox in ur veins
beat u like a grandpa, stab u with a cane
off course it will be sharp, kill u even faster
all of u can die, life is what were after
so i made this machine, thinkin it wouled be the thing
chang yo life, well end it after u die u can be the king
of ur own world, i can even kill u buy u fuckin to much
drain all ur seamen while ur screamin put u in the clutch
then we change the image from ashanti to ur mom
instant heart attack ends in ur life bein gone
we can cut ur wrists ur thighs and ur throat
inject poisonous pain killers there will be no time to gloat
to ur friends cuz ur in an instant bloat
cuz in the pain killer was snake poison
all of this because of the life u have chosen
we can tie a metal coil around ur neck, then pull it tight
or a bigger rope let u drop, see if ur light
im gana be the 1st one to see what this shits about
(slit, bang, fwoosh) DJ- uh yeah hes out

what amplified ya anger all of a sudden?

1. Use Proper Spelling/English
2. Even Out Your Bars
3. Thanks For The Reply
4. Pick A Better Topic

This is like a ficton novel. But I wasn't feeling it son like ^^^^ he said pic a better topic

yo grafix i been goin through shit in my life all of a sudden and ive tried to kill my self a few times but i jus cant do it so it helps me to write rhymes bout my shit thats the reason i wrote this

yo dawg thats some shit i thought that ur bars were uneven and the flow could of been better, better vocab would helped u out

much respect to u though 1

the concept was nice...I believe u got the name from the rock group...but ur multis were weak...and seemed forced....and spelling was wack lol...

peace

thanx guys, yeah i notice i had a few to many errors and yeah i agree with all of ya lol, yeah there prolly is a rock group called that im not gana take the time to look it up tho, 1 respect to all of ya

anybody that wanna talk to me i got yahoo messenger and my name is lil_ballin_boy