My first freestyle eva
Tell me what I gota do to elivate.........5-6 min ryhme

look.........

Quick somebody get me a joint, I havent been hi all today up to this point/ more addictive than nicotten its whyy I started at thirteen/ just turned sixteen, 3 whole years of bein a green feen/
coudnt help it cuz it was doin my body good like createin/
On the other side of the boarder marijuana isnt leagalized/
(detroit) get caught smokin trees there like I did you end up gettin brutilized/ by undercover bitch cops wit undercover cars who park in disguise not in theyr regular uniforms, but dressed in a fuckin Suit and Tie/ I was drunk one night, waved, said Hi/
1minute later im told to put my fuckin hands in the sky/ him and his partner wanted a strip search/ I said I was catholic n it went against my church/ 2 days lata Im in court sewing Pigs fo stickin they hands down my shorts/

1 joint dont get my hi no more/ now im buyin blunt raps at my local convenient store/ still of underage but this guy sells me em' cuz ive been in here "420" times before/ my tolerance levels alot lower, 1 joint between us four?/ forget that shit just drive me up to my front door/
One nite i smoked so much weed it made me gag/
den woke up the next mornin but stil copped another bag/
Quit the basketball team cuz my lungs turned black a green/
2 strides n' im burn-out blowin steam down on my hands and knees
So if you lookin on quitin it dont matte how far u run/ no chance, none, next time u smell it it's guna hit u like 2 ton/.................

Wait Until You Might Have To Get A Job....
Or Have A Relationship....
Display People Skillz.....
Piss In A Cup To keep A Roof Over Your Head
Before Your World Crashes And Pisses On You...

Believe Me You Wont Like Weed
That MuchUnless Your Rich As Fuck
And None Of that Matters...
To You At All.....

As For Your Flow It Was Crazy Basic For An
Overplayed Topic....Bizzy Bone....Luniz....
Many More Who Decided Not To Be Creative
And Be An Emcee For Three Minutes Or So....

~Elevate And Be More Creative With Your Words
And Say Things Not How Theyr Said Normally~

Maybe I Replied Cause I Dont Smoke Anymore

aight


still uppin feedback ppl

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=69383

just dropped a open mic about addiction

peep

i say yours is not really creative but nice concept

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I don't think the smoke type shit is a good style for you ..... wasn't feeling it in some spots