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Old 07-29-03, 07:56 AM   #1
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Fake Bitches.......................(mad feedback)

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Todays bitches are all fonies/ lies at all levels, even trusted the bull-shit they told-me/ 1 time I found out he was lyen it pissed me off as 4 his friends had to fuckin hold me/ back from tryen to stab the bitch wit my key in his left eye/ havent talked since Jr High, that was the last time i said goodbye/
They tell you to believe em but u just cant trust em/ everything they says a fuckin lie or joke, cant take them seriously like they Sabrina the witches cat Salem/
dont wanna be around this/ I should Peace/ grab my things and leave, this aint sumthin i'll miss/ gota give notification to my girl that ive had enough, blow her her last kiss/
I was just locked out of my house/ by my mom, soon as i broke in I pissed all over her favourite blouse/ pissed at the fact she still dont have a spouse/ like a normal family, a happy one like Mickey and Mini Mouse/
Im on the wrong road, lost, no sence of Direction/ this shits a curse, like someone injecdted me with a lethal injection/ gotta stop smokin or by the time im 40 I wont be able to have an Erection/ get my life back on track, ppl always said i had potential, that i could work for the government, mabe i'de win an Electtion/ become a teacher just to hand out detentions/ theres a lot of occupations out there for me I could mension/ but if things keep goin this way I'll only be faced wit rejection../
NObody knows what the FUCK ive been through/ the things im around and the things I do/ Ide do anythin to be in your shoes/ just for a day let me play you/ Families got no respect for me, they here my name they say "Who"?/ o that foo/ (fool)
Dont even talk to my bro no more/ its a new rule/ its set,
still remember tthe shit we use to do, swimmen/ chillen in our backyard pool/ lol always made fun a me cuz when ide sleep Ide drool/
So Slow down wit that Pot before ur lungs turn black and rot/ plus your ass dont wanna get caught thats wut started shit wit my mom, after that we always faught/ but don worry she trust me today...not/
now Im sleepin in the front yard on a fuckin caught/ somedays i wish sum1 would just walk by wit a gun, put me on the channel 7 news wit information on how i was shot/............
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Old 07-29-03, 09:41 AM   #2
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The Way You Structured THis Was Wack As Fuck, I Can Barely Even See Where Your Bars Begin n' End!

From What I Seen Of It, It Looks Pretty wack To me, Structure It n' Up Your Vocab At least!
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Old 07-29-03, 10:59 AM   #3
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Yeah I must agree it was really hard to follow. To be honest I stop reading after a a few lines down! NEEDS work
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