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07-30-03, 06:58 AM
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5:45 in da morning keystyle (sober thoughts)
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aiiight kidz...it's 5:45 in da morning...but I can't sleep so I decided to key somethin'...so forgive me if it soundz stupid aiiight...
I lay my head-on-the-ground after wavin' my machete-around// dead-to-the-soundz of the night in fright I grab a knife to slice my thoughts of sleepin' whenever Freddy'z around// Jason jumps into my bedroom thru my open-window// chokin'-nympho'z soakin'-in-clothez my bitch is burning like smokin'-indo// oh shit...all that can come to my head is sick-thoughts// da kid-caught the germ so I wanna chop my dick-off// rip-off... my flesh like a deadly disease// messin'-wit'-me you bound to have a found ya head-in-a-tree// infectious-with-heat to leave you dead-in-the-street I bledgeon-a-beat...how the fuck you supposed to step-with-no-feet?????? I'm not a vengeful man but retribution-keeps-flirting// I come "off the head" like an exacutioner-working// you afraid-of-art cause those-behind-you-might-stare// you play-the-"part" cause my wordz are growin'-on-you-like-hair... Last edited by Prolifik Prophet : 08-01-03 at 02:14 AM. |
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07-30-03, 11:31 AM
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IP:
yo that shit was sick thun i'm really feelin it, i just wish it was a lil bit longer but other than that thun u brought da heat keep it poppin thun aight ~1~
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07-30-03, 07:49 PM
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^^^thanks for da feedback god...Still uppin' on this bitch...
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07-31-03, 01:08 AM
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IP:
what the fuck is this?????? I need some fuckin' feedback damnit!!!!!!
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07-31-03, 05:15 AM
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Run Bitch......Ruunn!!!!!
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dis was sik i like dis big upps 2 you
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Huh china. |
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07-31-03, 06:26 AM
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IP:
^^^thanks for da feedback show...
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07-31-03, 10:58 PM
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IP:
still uppin'
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08-01-03, 11:49 AM
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IP:
This was sick for a keystyle... great wordplay in this piece....
I lay my head-on-the-ground after wavin' my machete-around// dead-to-the-soundz of the night in fright I grab a knife to slice my thoughts of sleepin' whenever Freddy'z around// Definitely your best verse of the piece... keep comin' with the hot shit... |
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08-02-03, 03:37 AM
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IP:
^^^thanks man...if you see this and you see the one I did at 4 in da morning...you can tell that these are all off the dome...I ain't just bullshittin' so y'all would give me more props like some of these kidz...real off the dome piecez are inconsistant... unless you some kinda super dope lyrical rapper...lol
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08-03-03, 02:19 AM
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IP:
still uppin' for feedback...
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08-03-03, 02:50 AM
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IP:
oh I like that shit.funny stuff.Phat drop dawg.
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08-03-03, 09:19 PM
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IP:
ill....
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08-03-03, 10:43 PM
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IP:
Yo liked the mukti's and met's props dawg.
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08-04-03, 05:48 AM
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#14
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IP:
thanks for da feedback y'all...never can have too much ya know...lol
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