ok check in and spit first

Uppin for you man this is the real battle
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aight yo...check it
You shouldn't be battlin' me cuz you dunno "Jack"-"Shit"-about this/ (Jack the ripper, jack shit)
You belong in "Rudolph", cuz you're from the island of "misfits"

Seriously Jack, This is a battle an' the chips are stacked/
Your bitch is stacked/
And this may seem like front lines but you're gettin' bitch slapped!

So Ill delinquents is your crew?? Well ALL hands on deck/
This fag is a jew, he needs to beg for repect!

Check it I have rippa 2nd guessing himself/
He cant "ripp" pussy so accepting my challenge-just-fucked- "himself"/
Man you need to get "Shots" to protect our own health/
I read you like a book so go back and sit on your shelf...

aight holla back

yo man after i spat i saw u viewin this thres for like 30 mins then you just left......wtf is that? pussy............................................. ..............

generatein a crate and the name on its $$CrEaTe$$,your fucken disses are fake, you shake as I decimate your white ass herb race, you betta learn your place, god's told me your fate and its to undergo disgrace, as I'm stompin on your rib cage your gettin your mom orally raped, cause you aint a nigga, your just a whiggas ~bait~

Like fish and chip's even british can break your diss, your just like a zit annoying and parasitic, as I'm punchin you with rhythimic raps, even you sit there and clap, cause I've got the balls to be black and diss your whack white ass right back, closest thing you got to a dick is a dildo that's gotta be ~strapped~

Fucken midget your rep will never grow, your just a toronto hoe, I'd flip you a 50 just so you would go, only bitch you'll get is your mom cause she's a buffalo, spittin venom on your from head to toe, you sit there and go "ummmmm you blow" you aint got any tough punches or flow, you rhyme what you know, and you don't even got enough to beat my little ~toe~

I'm flippin the script on this shit, your tryin to be extra gesticulate but even that won't cover up how bad you spit, I'm senda ya to the crypt, your last request was to suck my dick, so I fucked you up the prick, you enjoyed it so much, you took a picture so you would remember how you got ~ripped~

I'm merkin the earth, I should have eliminated you from birth, slit your tongue and wrists with a dirk, that way you would drown in your own horrible lyrics by a herb, I'm spittin lyrical verbs, you don't even diserve to set foot near my dirt, I think even you don't wanna hear the shit you blurt your rep is sinkin faster then George the ~3rd~ (king of england during the revolutionary war)

Last line I'm spittin, those lines of your were to bad to be prewrit, My raps are a strike and your's are just a 7-10 split hated more then a chick with a dick, go roll your next ball in the gutter, I mudered you'll hole family after I fucked your mother, you've just been killed faster then your ball was returned, maybe after this battle you've learned that you get what you ~earn~

I didn't rap 10 lines because My lines are so damn big and plus you didn't either so what ever.

i said 10-20 lines but whatever good battle....uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .........

Jack that was a little long dude but you took it with the flow and punches, nice spit to both mc's, that was some good reading.

vote-Jack

can't poll vote, sorry, but can you hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69549

jack took this battle no contest the other guy got kinda muddled up and jacks was a 2 long but good battle anyways...................................both yall keep up the rappin .................peace out

Jack took this easily....only prob.....shorten ur barz man...nobody likes to read a book....lol....other than that it was nice...u had some pretty good rhymes...Create u had some good shit too....but not as aggressive as Jack....

Check one of these:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68980
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68981

peace
4:20

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Yea I know I gotta shorten my lines, its a bitch :\ anyway uppin and remember to poll vote this
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Jack = too much
Create = too little
Create has sum good punches and a decent flo and he might of taken it if he kept of going, but he didnt
Jack had da multis, da flo, da wordplay and the vocab to pull it off
but fo' real, that shit was like 1 and a half battles you were spitt'n
and da other cat did half a battle
I suck at math, but I know rap
VOTE=Jack

Yea I know I gotta shorten my shit, thanks though dawg and uppin!
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I DROPPED AN HONEST VOTE HERE
PLZ DO THE SAME THERE, THX
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69773

vote on this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7048#post667048

and yes jack that was long

but good

he did his shit in bars
o well

vote-jack
for punches creativity and flow

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

Uppin
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