future audio..just need a beat..

Shoulda..coulda..woulda..

I shoulda did it at first, and took over my nerves..
I coulda planned dat birth, now im mad at da nurse..
I woulda tried a lil harder, if I knew I had a chance at win n..
I shoulda, coulda, woulda, but damn, i didn’t..

I shoulda just asked her out, surpassed the doubt..
I shoulda sold through the drought, and moved it out..
I shoulda stood tall, instead of like a shrewd in the crowd..
I shoulda screamed out loud, let em know that im proud..
Shoulda just shut up and listened, stead of lie n and bitch n..
Shoulda made another track, let em know who they was diss n..
Shoulda cleared my plate, stead of cry n in the kitchen..
Shoulda made my dreams come true, but I stood hope n and wish n..
I shoulda ran to the house, when those sirens let loose..
I shoulda emptied my closet, started try n on the truth..
I shoulda helped out those kids, yet I destroyed the youth..
I shoulda accepted his application, and employed our troops..
Shoulda knew right from wrong, but I did it anyway..
Shoulda saved that man, cause I know plenty gays..
Shoulda been her shelter in the storm, umbrella in the rain..
Shoulda just gave him some change, but yet, i refrained..

I shoulda did it at first, and took over my nerves..
I coulda planned dat birth, now im mad at da nurse..
I woulda tried a lil harder, if I knew I had a chance at win n..
I shoulda, coulda, woulda, but damn, i didn’t..

I coulda told the truth to the judge, but my lips didn’t budge..
Stood alone, hold n a grudge, face the definition of mean mug..
I coulda let the anger pass by, and gave her a hug..
Tried just play n outside, but my playground was drugs..
Coulda walked by in silence, but every 1 knows im a tyrant..
Fuck wear n gang colors, my complexion alone is too vibrant..
Coulda put the gun away, but I got known through violence..
Gotta chip on my shoulder, and my pride wont let me hide it..
I coulda serverd my year in that place, but I had to escape..
Face covered by guilts drapes, hurt like a girl raped..
I coulda dropped the weed, but walked around half baked..
Know im a waste, families disgrace, in that, theres no mistake..
Coulda went to the funeral, maybe visited the grave..
But if it wasn’t for me, hed still be here today..
Coulda drove sober that night, but my mouth didn’t behave..
He sat meaningless like a slave, innocent passenger, I miss u dave..

I shoulda did it at first, and took over my nerves..
I coulda planned dat birth, now im mad at da nurse..
I woulda tried a lil harder, if I knew I had a chance at win n..
I shoulda, coulda, woulda, but damn, i didn’t..

If I woulda shot da mutha fucka when I had a chance..
But I couldn’t pull the trigger like I was stuck in a trance..
The way he looked, I knew he was ready to dance..
1 shot woulda done it, let em be finished by ants..
Woulda never let left his side, if I knew what was come n..
Gotta stay in shape, so like any other day I went run n..
Saw the car pass by, shoulda knew it was something..
Heard the drums drum n, when those bullets started thump n..
If I woulda accepted defeat, let dat lil nigga retreat..
2 times in the chest, and 1 in his back as he crawled on his knees..
Wouldn’t have to be in here, bang n on walls for beats..
Now I see more violence everyday than I did in the streets..
Woulda gave her that hug, if I knew it was the last time..
This topic right here is too sensitive, prolly wont even rhyme..
Im sorry I cant finish, ill let the beat continue out my lines..


I shoulda did it at first, and took over my nerves..
I coulda planned dat birth, now im mad at da nurse..
I woulda tried a lil harder, if I knew I had a chance at win n..
I shoulda, coulda, woulda, but damn, i didn’t..

yo thios was a nice first peace from you to analyze though the should could concept was murdered in this you did it great the consept the talent i think you will do great thing on here and look forward to reading more

aight i thought this shit was incredible very original the topic was hot i liked the chorus and how you put it together overall this was just fuckin sick kid keep doin ya thing

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even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

up n..replied to about 8 ppl earlier..

Saw the car pass by, shoulda knew it was something..
Heard the drums drum n, when those bullets started thump n..
If I woulda accepted defeat, let dat lil nigga retreat..
2 times in the chest, and 1 in his back as he crawled on his knees..
Wouldn’t have to be in here, bang n on walls for beats..
Now I see more violence everyday than I did in the streets..
Woulda gave her that hug, if I knew it was the last time..
This topic right here is too sensitive, prolly wont even rhyme..
Im sorry I cant finish, ill let the beat continue out my lines..
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that was one of the siccest pieces i've see since i've been on this site the third verse had me fucking tripping dawg.nice drop very nice drop.concept was crazy original

Alright, here it goes... great concept... very original... flow was decent, but the content was very boring... not a single line stood out to me... your vocab was very basic... that's not always a bad thing, but this was a little too basic... This was nice for a first post... keep workin' at it... and you'll be on to something...

obviously u didnt read the open n statement^^^^..this is for an audio..very few ppl use big vocab in audios..i dont see a post from u on here..but ill be look n..shit better be immaculate wit the crit u give n..