Yo pretty simple on!! BORED as EVA
************************************************** **Hold up/ regulate the block this bitch impending through straight busing glocks//
Dropping the bars that’s hot the average hoes can’t lighten me//
I’m like a injection of bad medicine leaving you in a mental block//
How does it feel to be in a state of distress//
my flows grounds superior devastation
you hoes strain up a verse like constipation/
my flows incise you up make knife like incisions leave you with vengeance
and I doubt if I leave in a hearse what I carry in my purse aint shit worse//
Known for coming out of the devious situation in the mix like alien invasion//
And for the hoes I don’t wanna battle you but since you insist on droppen that nonsense
u kind of got me pissed naw ama make you abscond you crew// WarLords accumulate like roaches// Ya think ya crew tight whats that shit you smoken/
yall gone fuck with the wrong crew expel ya ass from rapbattles like after birth//
to da femecees is it allergy season? Cause ya hoes shunning me like you allergic//
I know you done heard murda mistress stay packin in the heat of the night or when I am high as a kite//my bars are like hand grenades head captin of this rap brigade I reckshop holdin it down for the warlords put the barrel of my gun in ya mouth (nigga deep throat) say it loud WarLords running shit and ya proud like james brown//Ya know am wearin the coronet step up so I can clown ya// niggas married to my shit in holy matrimony// my album sells gotta be considered a fuckin monopoly// am stopping all women suffrage takin the stage you ask na feel my rage/

AHH YEAH!

^^^^good shit girl..............................

my flows grounds superior devastation
you hoes strain up a verse like constipation/

^^haha great line......

my bars are like hand grenades head captin of this rap brigade I reckshop holdin it down for the warlords put the barrel of my gun in ya mouth (nigga deep throat) say it loud WarLords running shit and ya proud like james brown

^^^so sexy when u rep it

This was aiight... not into that whole 'glocks, got things on lock' shit, but your vocab and wordplay was decent enough for me to look over all of that... this was nice...

this is basic stuff, played topic, no multis, wordplay, imagery i could see. you need elavation. you need to put your bars in order so they're easier to read. pick an original topic, preferably something you can relate to and try and write about it in a creative way.

O lord talk about tell some1 what to write are we emcee and femcees of producers lol thanx for the advice lord have mercy the topic lol

ps PD it was nice to hear you don't get into that type but was still willin to hear as a femcee its what i want to hear verstility is very important to me thanks

tis was ok...didn't see nothing special, but i didn't see nothing bad about it...you need some elevation but this was pretty good.

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cool, thanks for the feed back love UPPIn