ok check in and I'll spit

check-check............try to spit like 15-20 mins and i'll match......

good luck homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm standin right in front of you, and still some clips your running through, your wastein your gun's and tools, your whacker then sean paul singin his fucked up regae thinkin he's cool, but atleast he sticks to his gun's like glue and doesn't drool over johnny knoxville in a thong, cause your just a jack ass fucking a a bong you fool, your raps are "shittier" then an elephant's sample of ~"stool"~

Like a Shaman I'm cravein to suck out some young blood like a raven, Your hated worse then that fucked up show, everyone loves raymon, you aint got no fame or chains, you get blamed for fucken people up worse then mary jane with your rap's that I will tame, you can't touch this I'm hotter then a ~flame~

Your on the destructional brink, aint no time for your whack hijinks, like a pussy your pink your about to get dinked, you've thrown everything about me but the kitchen sink and still you can't even break my links Iafter I slice your body I'll wear you like a jacket made of ~mink~

You just a disgrace to your whole god damn herb race, cause even they could get a vote verse a middle weight, your goin down faster then d-krew_repping that little ape, but the sad part is even you could be a victim of his rape, cover your face up with a cape, no one wants to look at splooge when it didn't even ~ejaculate~

Your a victim of my fatal componetz, unlike your rap career I was raised to take over your throne, when I spit I flip I can take down even a veteran's prick, My raps were home grown and they easily flow, your shit was just wrote and it sinks like Bill clinton's ~votes~

I should have covered up this thread, your rhyme's weren't meant to be ready, unless a nigga wants to be dead of laughter, fucken bastard, they funny cause they suck you should be callin me your master, I can tell that your white so go pick my black ass cotton before I have to pull out my ~blaster~

make ya intestines intwine like u was twisted, don't risk it//
cut off ya arm from tha elbow and tell u to wrist~it//
u leave me no choice but to dismember~this~fake....//
this bitches verse ain't makin sence like intentional~mistakes//
it seems the source of ur words comes from tha dictionary//
tha only time this bitch makes tha cover is when its in the obituaries//
im inside ur mind bitch, i'll make ya have motion~pictures//
...this bitch claims he's a thug, while i write gangsta~scriptures//
don't test me kid do i look like school~work....//
everybody gather round to watch this fool~fuckin~get~merked//
i think you'll have better idea's when i dismantal ur brain//
he know's ima win, he's so sure he turns to his name!!!//
if this kat was blind he'd still be feelin my text like im rappin in brale//
trapped inside a ball of ice, cuz after this battle, that's the only way this kat can INHALE!!!!

uppin...........uppin.......................uppin. ........................uppin..........

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Vote: Youngblood

I read the book by JTR and it was ight but it was too BIG, and it started to get hard to understand after a while. youngblood came hard, wasn't best he's ever done but oh well good enuff this time....young won with punches, wordplay and structure.

yo yo yo this was and good battle but my vote goes to young cause of little words but best punches my vote

vote young

good battle but damn jack i didn't realize i wasn't gonna have to read a novel......haha.....well close battle but i think youngblood edged tha win

I'm standin right in front of you, and still some clips your running through, your wastein your gun's and tools, your whacker then sean paul singin his fucked up regae thinkin he's cool, but atleast he sticks to his gun's like glue and doesn't drool over johnny knoxville in a thong, cause your just a jack ass fucking a a bong you fool, your raps are "shittier" then an elephant's sample of ~"stool"~

those was like random thoughts that weren't really punches at all i mean especially sean paul line where u said stick to my guns like glue 1st of all that's not a diss and 2nd of all it's girls not guns

Vote- Young Blood

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Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

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uppin for jack tha rippa............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........

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damn JTR you should become a writer cuz the shit you write is long enuff for the new york times bestseller list DAYUM that was long.......ane ways young got this with better punches and flow and all together a better over all verse

Vote - Youngblood

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Vote Youngblood

Felt his stuff bit more....wasn;t really feelin Jack much.............young's punches hit hard as did his verse.