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Here I am again, wit a thought formulatin'/
In my cerebral circulation I start concentratin'/ On obtainin' a new precedent, which style to represent/ Thinking of rhymes that'll cause comotion, and malcontent/ I put the mic to my mouth, forget my troubles/ And I spit complex words, I speak fast as doubles/ this shits off da heezy/believe me/ i spit this shit real eazy/this rhyme is- leavin yo mind-in along lastin bind- u can't subside/ ull neva get out of-u got nuttin to respond wit/ just drop da mic-and dun spit/ dun rap just get over it-just quit/u got no skill- hearin just me just spit this- gets ya day started-its a thrill/ short and sweet board so hear ya go Last edited by LiL LoCo~ : 08-03-03 at 02:50 PM. |
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short...but like you said "short an sweet" it was a nice drop i liked the vocab an flow 8/10 nice lil drop keep spitten dawg
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thanks UPPIN
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Nice Drop. Decent I Must Say.
Wow Really Nice Multis. Vocab Was Really Good In This Peice.Really Good. Nice Use Of It. Flow, Different, But I Was Def. Feeling It. Overall- 8/10 |
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thanks fellas
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yo i gotta say that if you had this vocab n shit in your battles you would win alot and if elevated punches youd own cuz a lot of newbs go on punches alone .....some kinda of bull shit.....
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Nice vocab son.Go look at my shit.
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thanks playas uppin^^^^^^^^
see the difference is i get thoughts real quik and i spit em when im really battlin in person and win like every time- but on here in battles my thoughts come to quik and i dun have a lot of time to jot em but i got a lot of good punces... so thanks for the feedback hope i get some more UPPIN |
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Descent shit dawg,well worth a read.
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thank you thank you uppin
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