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My diss to a FAT KID who i battled


Kid your rhymes r to simple/
u get on the mic and ill pop you like a pimple/
you beatin me is just silly/
i saw your life story it was called free willy/
cus i know im your biggest fear/
your so fat you havent seen your dick in a year/
my rhymes leave you pale/
the last time you saw a grand is when you stepted on a scale/
ill give your ass a kicken/
you dont handle the mic, the last thing you handled was a peice of fried chicken/
your to busy eating so how you gonna spit into it/
you might have a mustang but how u gonna fit into it/
kid i could do this all day/
me on the mic is like you in a all you can eat buffet/
you cant beat me so dont even try it/
you beatin me is like you going on a diet/

HAHAHA

that was a fukin helarious drop lol i loved that good spit

*you cant beat me so dont even try it/
you beatin me is like you going on a diet/*

that was great the way you worded that lol

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uppin this man dont sleep people
uppin uppin uppin uppin upping
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stupid 100 charecter thing i hate it

This was aight fam................But u gotta elevate on ur punches , vocab and Wordplay , They were too simple in this piece , But You're a Femcee , not too many femcees on R-B can spit hardcore rhymes......this was an aight piece for a Femcee

man 'm cracking up over here, that was funny shit
nice flow to it i found
anyway peace
keep droppin

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DIP SET DIP SET
cmon uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Faf good for a laugh.

Hmmm..Taking simple ass words and make it work & flow like that...That was freakin hill-airy-ass!!!!