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Old 08-02-03, 03:16 PM   #1
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Bring it if u want it nigga

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Old 08-02-03, 06:07 PM   #2
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yo uppin for this...niggaz peep
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Old 08-02-03, 08:21 PM   #3
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Beat Is Good...Your Delivery Is Like All Over The Place Man...Your Flow Is Heaps Hard To Follow...Seems Heaps Choppy And Hard To Understand...Just Work On Pronunciation And Delivery All The Time And Its Always Good To Up Lyrics...Stay Up...Pz...
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Old 08-02-03, 11:09 PM   #4
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your delivery was off point, and your flow was off too....it aint really collaborate with the beat....and take away the echoing, its too much...just stick with your doubles and leave it as that....the beat was iight, lyrics were ok...i aint like it much but wateva.... stay up and keep doing your thing tho....OnE




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