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Old 08-02-03, 11:54 PM   #1
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aMPLiFiBiaNS Productions Track.. "World Destruction"

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"World Destruction" (Nothing Else You Can Do)


aMPLiFiBiaNS Productions, new track


http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=480025&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=480025&q=Hi

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Old 08-03-03, 09:59 PM   #2
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nice choice of beat.....one of my favorites.....but lets get down to this....


ur delivery was off, and i noticed like at times u get stuck with your words, so u mumble them when u spit faster....the hook was ok....i like the way you doubled ur voice...but put more emotion into it...the beat was a little too loud..just a little tho....on ur second verse, try not to be too choppy with your bars...is like u waited too long to get back into your rhyme...i know what u was tryin to do, but make sure it goes crispy with the flow of the beat.....this was ok, not really my style to like, but keep doing your thing dawg...OnE



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