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Old 08-05-03, 12:33 PM   #1
Dariel Shariem
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Ain't Weak

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This is one of my last projects before I get my studio up..

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Old 08-05-03, 12:37 PM   #2
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the beat was iight....i thought the hook was type weak.....your delivery was kinda off...by a little bit, but your flow was going pretty good.....lyrics was iight, nuttin impressive...this track could be better tho, but props tho, stay up and keep doing your thing....OnE




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Old 08-05-03, 02:48 PM   #3
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its coo. but y do i hear alot of people with that same delivery/style. just wondering.
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Old 08-05-03, 05:20 PM   #4
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Nothing special nigga..tha lyrics are good..flow is alright..man keep doin ya thang nigga
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Old 08-05-03, 06:13 PM   #5
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wasn't feelin that one at all
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Old 08-05-03, 06:39 PM   #6
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^I agree with him, only thing that was ok was your flow. Keep at it though, pz
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Old 08-05-03, 07:35 PM   #7
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yeah.. this was really a trial run.. i wrote and recorded at 3am.. so i dunno.. lol..

its a trial run and it will be better wit the studio up.. i might fix it up now tho jus to make it tops.. before i can my studio
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Old 08-06-03, 02:15 AM   #8
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uppin
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Old 08-07-03, 01:32 AM   #9
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