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Old 08-05-03, 04:58 PM   #1
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Ask Prometheus I Stole Heat For Eternal Flame Effects...


Names Content I Came To Kill A Couple Minutes,
Represent For"Pencilvania Natives"
On The Microphone When Times Allowed
To Do So Cerebrals Lyrics Haven,
Terminal Illness,Deeper Than A Jeep Full Of
People Forreal Kid So Please Do,
Bring Forth Your Antorage,
With A Mic In Hand I Transform Into An Armored Guard,
Effects Similar To Yu-Gi-Oh's Milini Puzzle,
Hearts In The Verses Like The Cards To Touch You,
Kinetic Energy,Sick Mans Remedy,Remember Me?
Will Eventually,Proper Grammer,Propaganda,
Droppin Hammers, Props From Me For Displays
Of Philosophies Gotta Love A Job Like This,
My Daily Dreamer Nine To Fiver Leaning Tower Leaner,
Soul Survivor Checkerd Flagger Grabber Best Believe It
Now Recieving,Respect If I Get On Then Now Were Even,
Was Probaly Your Favorite One To Try And Shit On,
Regardless Of Hardships But Now Im Leading,
Housin Opposers Like Apartments Major Cake Taker,
Im The Batter Swingin For The Fences You Can Hate Later
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Old 08-05-03, 10:42 PM   #2
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Upping Cause I Wanna
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Old 08-05-03, 11:34 PM   #3
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Sup Content..
This seemed more a freestyle than a poetry drop, but it was entertaining to read regardless..
I've yet to easily catch the flow in your pieces, I dont know, the way you lay it all out on the page just makes it hard to catch, I mean ITS THERE, you just have to find it..I would love to hear you do audio tho.
The only crit. I could offer you would be to try and make your bars go together a little more smoothly, at times it seems like you're just jumpin all over the place..some better transition from line to line would solve that i think.
all around, pretty nice drop..
stay up and keep elevatin.. pz
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Old 08-06-03, 01:22 AM   #4
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Will Do Audio..Will Recognize Flow
Very Very Soon...People Dont Know

I Dont Know Why Its Difficult
But Thank You For Attempting

I Think V Is The Only One Who Can
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Old 08-06-03, 03:20 AM   #5
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keep droppin them aight
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Old 08-06-03, 01:47 PM   #6
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Um.....Hmmm.....Thanks

Like A One Armed Wide Reciever?
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Old 08-06-03, 07:12 PM   #7
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lol this piece was above most heads but it was real thought provoking i was blown away by the complexity this piece was like tinkering with a rubix cube u get that uncontrollable feeling of triumph figuring out the ins and outs, instant respect on this shit and i give u many a prop, 1luv.
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Old 08-06-03, 07:36 PM   #8
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~~ Content once again a hidden simplicity in your woven complexity. It takes more than a poetic eye to catch your cyrptic style, but to someone with a history of code cracking, your drops are far from lacking. Your style is reminecent of ancient text, lost in a world of metaphorical intent. Elevation is needed to completly read it, but for those who first fail, eventually prevail, then gleefully hail, the author who's next journey has begun to sail. ~~


I liked this drop, I was into incyrtion for a while, but I was ahead of my time and got shuned for it, so I feel you. It was only in my professional life where by my eye for the abstract was appreciated, and a milion codes I did crack, with 'Uncle Sam' the only pat on my back.


I am patting your back, applauding your accomplishment, and V isn't the only one, just the most noticeable...

Respect...
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Old 08-06-03, 10:20 PM   #9
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Most People Dont Catch What Im Saying
And Want Audio..I Got Cool Edit From
N Demik So It Wont Be Long....

Thanks For Being Smart With Your Replies
Because Its Certainly Appreciated

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Old 08-06-03, 11:40 PM   #10
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aight i can see your own unique style here it was really food ya had some personal stuff and i can see what your sayin it was very complex but it seemed simple it was a good disgise and i really really like your style
keep elevatin

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