first off let me make it clear.... loosing aint in my plans-
i haven't even burned you in rhymes- just given raiant uv lines-
to issue your skin tissue light tans-
save my illest shit and only spit flames-for 2 reasons....to light the weed-and 3rd degree a no~names fame-
i've been hot and i dont mean my 98 ferenheit-
anything i copywright -is written in 80 proof-
so when im spitten im the difference NATURAL LIGHT and ABSOLUTE-
fucken the massess up faster-place one shot like 151 fire to your head-the recoil would leave you dead-blast yea-
thinking you can add up to me you aint even a mathmattical answer-
CENTZ dont give a fuck if your ghostwritters GOD,ALLAH OR AMEN RAH- defeat me? i place this in the devils ibonics nigga HELL NAH!-
son im 0-3-that just means menatlly physically and literally-these dickriders aint my type-
i keep myself hetro though my raps phat enough to develop selulite-
impail your thought-repail skills and unvail-
you aint fresh but stail-leave your career broke lik K MART stock retail-and when the SHIPments PLUMMET your career will set SAIL-
pop 8 off-start a HOLOCAUST like ADOLF-you'd have no fans like if J-LO literally worked her ass off-no one will remember you like DAVID HASTELHOFF- your groupies be getting PIPED in they TAIL like cars with dual exhaust-

I DID THIS TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

who's the bitch-ask the crew you roll so deep with-if they say my name they must be used to getting dicked-get it? got it?
fag must be a trend-between you and your friends-
but for me fans screamin im the illest be the only time im on the recieving end-
must be a hoax-cause evry post-i read with your name was a bad joke-woarse then one aboute a dope fiend endorsing diet coke-
breath in the same room same booth and im liable to leave your wind pipes broke-fill the room in gasoline light a candle that will explode-if you dont blow-
callen yourself the GOD is fraud-you must be a faithless-athiest-that couldnt be me if we traded dna chains facese and places-im from the 757 but not the same va-i claim VERBAL ASSASSIN with any and every word i say-ricochet through your crochet- spit 47 give you cardiac and spell with A~K-boom

This drop was ill all the way threw the wordplay and structure was excellent and the flow and ryhmes were great 2 nice drop man
stay up nad hit up these battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71510
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71509

did the both i was fair in my votes sorry if you disagree but i posted why on both.

One word - Impressive,thats wot it was.

Peace

tyte hard shit

nice drop man, good word usage and im not sure who u was to tho, well good job, return the favor and peep my song break away

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Nice Shit...
Liked The Flow, I felt that it fell off at times....But i still stuck with it

Vocab- Awesome as always....You have a nice Use of it...
Creativness- Yes, This Was An Alright Topic, A Little Played Out, But It Was Served Well
Wordplay- I saw it in there......Nice use of it

Overall-8/10

Feelin it

Go hit up mine