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Old 08-07-03, 07:58 PM   #1
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Don't Play With Me

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Ballas on the street say ima damn genius
If rap is mean, then im the fuckin meanest
I think your rap game has come to an end
Fags dont rap no mo', its a new trend
All these bitches jus want in my pockets
My gat isn't cocked...but i guess i'll cock it
If ya dont want to be a hood ornament, i suggest you quit
I can shot my glock faster then I can spit
You say your game is soaring, and you got a lot of hos
But that's never gonna last, like ben and j.lo
Ice on the wrist and ice on the neck
I dont buy the cheap shit, or did u forget
Stir beef with me, playa your insane
You better run for your life, like Saddam Hussien
As soon as you trip and fall, i'll be there
And give your punk ass your last fuckin stare
As I look at you layin there, beggin for your life
All I could think about is fucking your wife
You need to cool off and just take a seat
You jus betta hope we don't meet on the street
Everybody who knows me, knows i'm playin
I'm really not like, i'm just sayin
I'm the Pimp of all Pimps you can't take that away
Your rhymes and beats turn straight into gays
Holla back on the rebound, show me some love
If ya see me in your hood playa throw up your dub


Just expressin myself
No Hate
Nasti Nati

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Old 08-07-03, 07:58 PM   #2
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Holla at me
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Old 08-07-03, 08:10 PM   #3
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Ice on the wrist and ice on the neck
I dont buy the cheap shit, or did u forget


I was gonna say stop talking about shit you don't got but than you said....

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Everybody who knows me, knows i'm playin
I'm really not like, i'm just sayin


Ok, but why you wasting your time talking about shit that ain't you?

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throw up your dub


Wtf are you talking about? Ran out of words to rhyme with or somin?

On tha real, ya shit was basic and all and I can tell you just started writing. Work on ya shit more and talk about real concepts that relate to you. I see you attempted to use metaphors and similies but most were played. Keep working at it tho....Ok drop for a newbie....about 4/10 compared to tha average.
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Old 08-07-03, 08:13 PM   #4
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yea first time.....thanks for stright up comment
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Old 08-07-03, 09:13 PM   #5
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ok but needs elevated
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Old 08-08-03, 12:18 AM   #6
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talk to me y'all
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Old 08-08-03, 12:22 AM   #7
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NEEDS TO ELIVATE BUT GOOD FOR IN THE CLUB ISH
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Old 08-08-03, 12:32 AM   #8
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Try using multies....
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Old 08-08-03, 12:42 PM   #9
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keep oit coming
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Old 08-08-03, 03:11 PM   #10
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holla at me
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Old 08-08-03, 09:29 PM   #11
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