No hate, juss a battle

:Rules:
Pax spits first
5-15 lines
no hate votes
no d/r votes
no crew votes
no feeding
no biteing



Good luck Pax.

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ima show this kid the true meanin of "mortality", "losin touch with reality", beatin this kid wit him writin "Weird Al Parodies"// (haha writin a parody of a parody? that would be wack as hell)
"Arrest" ya "teeth" leavin ya shook put em in "straight jackets" just to "clean" those "dirty crooks" //
kid catchin-lyrical-"hooks" like the "Captain" goin back to "school" and "hittin- the-books"//
ima "crush-ya-essence" like "fat chicks on-ya-dick", ur an "insult-to-my-presence" like an "ill-egal-spic"//
Like "supreme pizzas" u receivin the "works", kids "verse crumbles" like "empire of the ottoman turks"// (empire that completly crumbled following WW1)
no wonder everyone hate fa u is so deepset, what with u postin ya "genital self-portraits"// (check his attachment pic lol)
take-hold if illness levels was measured physically u'd be diagnosed with-a-cold, kid wouldnt have a "big dick" if he typed it-in-"bold"//
kid dickrydes shit like the "blacksox" of "1919", kids verse is seen in "crisis" like "middleaged parents" cryin "your-teen my-teen"//
like "failed marriages" ya punches only hurtin you, implodin, like a "resonance" it "bounce back" feel like punch wit kung fu//
Ive left u "locked up" u'll never be "off the chain", keep ya head up betta "ja", cuz in 10yrs u still be needin morph for the pain// (lol ja rule is too cocky fo his 0 skills, he got a big head)

Yo Pax nice spit yo

im guna peep this when MOrtality is dun

but man in the mean time can u peep this hot battle, its bein slepped on like MAN

peace

this is it................................................ .........................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71905

waiting till otha verse is dropped...................................

peep this battle n drop a vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71729

Aight bitch my words are like "Explict Content" you beatin me is straight "nonsence", who the fuck gives a shit about "Pax" i'll merk you bitch and make u pay "Tax"//
How the fuck you gone talk about the "Past" it's all about the future and what happens "Last", how you gone take advise from Seltur aka "Ruthless" his biteing ass tips will leave ya "Toothless"//
Your right kid ya should go back ta school and "hit the books" yo wack ass lines and them "Hidious Looks", see i'll have you fallin down like the "Twin Towers" talk shit i'll make ya wack like "Austin Powers"//
See bitch i'm the real definition of "Mortality" my rhymes so ill urs not even "Reality", look ya rhymes bout as old as "Dr.Dre" fuck him, u, and the rest of "NWA"//
Who the fuck cares about your weak "Punches" i'll eat ya shit up like they was some sack "Lunches", I'll leave ya dazed you wont be able to tell "Time" how the fuck you got those wins on ya record with that wack-as-hell "Rhyme"//
My words will put u in pain u'll need "Morphine" who knows ya rode Ruthless dick so long u prolly got HIV and Aids so ya in the hospital 4 days of the week ta make sure "Ur Clean", yea ya prolly gonna bitch sayin my lines are "Long" fuckin faggit u prolly work up in a gay bar dancin in a grey "Thong"//
See you like Nelly straight asian and "Hispanic" i'll leave u and ur wack rhymes sunk like the "Titanic", once Ruthless gets banned theres a guy registerd named Seltur aint that "Ironic" is it they both wack or am i to high off "Chronic"//(Ruthless= Seltur backwards with out 2 s's and an h)
Who the fuck cares about the "War lords" thinkin ya'll hard cuz ya the "Lords Whores", ur verse was wack no need for anyone to "Quote 'em" who knows Ruthless aka Seltur's bitch ass prolly "Wrote 'em"//
The WarLords are "Wack Man" they all up on Rapbattles.com dissapointing "Alldig, The End, and Mad Man", if you think i got 0 skills your too high off "Crack" you prolly gonna get dick ryders cuz ya bitch ass verse was "Wack"//
Your a poor ass bitch u can only afford 200 dollar "Cars" piss me off i'll merk you to "Jupitor or Mars", see kid the illest is "A New Beginning" Pax your not a tough competitor so this battle "You are not Winning"//
Fuck you kid your "Ignorant" readin my verse will leave you confused and "alliderate", fuck it this shit is "Done" i'm not worried bout this cuz this shit is mine "Son"//

Aight uppin for votes............................................. ...........................
Props to ya pax
we still straight

Uppin 1st uppin fa me ~1~

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AYO THIS WUZ A CLOSE ASS BATTLE BUT I WUZ FEELIN PAX'S SHIT A LIL MORE BUT MORTALITY BROUGHT IT BUT PAX AHD SUM HARDER PUNCHES AND HIS VERSE MADE A LIL MORE SENSE

VOTE=PAX

^hmm i disagree mortality ccame pretty heated off sum hard punches
none the less pax came jsut as harder.........
vote mortal
harder poucnhes more personals..
better rhmye scheme
good battle props to yall both

^hmm i disagree pax had way more harder punches

plus better flow,creativity,metas,

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personals and punches win battles and mortality had both
pax had some hard hitten shit too but mortality had personals to go with has punches
flow=pax
wordplay=pax
punches=mortality
personals=mortality
overall vote=mortality

hit me up yall i just need one more vote but vote honestly
thanx

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=71659

breakdown:

personals-pax
vocab-pax
multis-neither didnt see alot but mortality since he had more of rhymes off 1 word
wordplay-pax, he was more complex
punches-pax

vote=pax

no hate vote simply thought his was better than mortality

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uppin for a 2nd time.

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