topical life of a gone out light wishin one day my destiny wont be my sacrifice/
money drugs an woman bein the only victim in my hells paridice to entice/
unlike the 3 blind mice i no where im headin not where i belong/
even though i turned to the paper put my emotions to a song/
in this world everything people try do perfect is normally wrong/
so heres a fatigee a simple apoligee of me hurtin an creatin felonys/
i never realized how bad it tortued the lives of'a soldja even tho i didnt mean any negitivity/
the streets seem ta raise me comin up in the hood you never new much/
as i grasp for lust an not hate tryna get out the streets to be safe i begged the lord to be my crutch/
told em everything i did wrong from day break to dusk, gave em the 4-1-1/
asked why i was craven unpredictable thoughts of killin my pops cuz he treated me like an only begotten son/
so this life is a hell hole for all us but as a m-c im starven to break free of the simplicity/
wonna make like mosses split the damn sea be like geezes an CRUZ-SA-FY me/
3 things in life that kill a man greed hate an envy sounds retarded but its true/
the docters told me its not just killin me its also predictable to others simaler you/
we all go up we all fall down we all feel lonely we all turn are frowns around/
writtin in blood on this pad of paper that we all kings in queens but why aint we crowned?/

basic knowlage of life of our time...
world war 3 we feel it all thru prime...
waitin for the day you finally do shine...
prove to the world yo a fuckin' master mind..

unpredictable to so many yet im so heavonly obey the 10 camandments/
people still bringin us down an wilden out reachin for our compliments/
never hear to much from our outer world even wen you've been blessed wit 1 great achievment/
somebody still up in yo face tryn'a ruin the moment an push u face first in the cement/
im not a mastermind like pac an biggie but im sittin back not lettin my thoughts be unheard/
im'a tell you bout my life cuz people keep there feelings caged in like unfree bird/
so im givin the word lettin times take a swerv an listen to the birth of a rage/
im trapped in'a cage but damn we all basically the same age goin thru wut im sayin on this page/

thats a start to a song im tryn'a get some meaning for..i was hopin ye'all cud help me make it better...peace...gimme some ideas for it..

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

why didnt you use this for our collab this was perfect i liked every aspect