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Old 08-09-03, 08:53 PM   #1
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Transformers: The Decepticons run Cybertron

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.:The Decepticons run Cybertron: Part 1 .:


Disrupt autobots distress signals, SOUND WAVE aka punishment inflicted through an audio transmission, Eject RUMBLE causing the Earth’s grounds ta shatter into 5 dimensions, I erupt plots through telephone lines encoded in digital!!!

Aerodynamic in his physical, STAR SCREAM disengages smoke screens to cloud Autobots visuals, Adjustin in mid air similar to Jordan remaining anti-gravitational, I disperse lazors putting enemies in conditions past critical!!!!

#1 Squadron Commander of Tyrants, MEGATRON rules with Iron Shield thats impervious to a virus, Open my eyelids to see World Dominance in my iris , Metamorphosis into a 9 millimeter seizing any enemy survivors, I pardon STAR SCREAMS ignorance placing hin under constant pressure like a fire hydrant

Savagely chew through barb wires, RAVAGE sprint 0-60 under any time desired, Spying on the opposition remaining hidden behind billboards and fliers, Red eyes shoot tazors to incenerate victims til they shrink like 20" rhymes on Goodyear tires, I use my titanium paws clawing opposition til they become expired!!!!

(D)ont (T)rust (A)nyone, GALVATRON aka blow your ass into Oblivion, The resurrected leader wants STAR SCREAMS head before the day is done, Change into an energion launching genecidal Bazooka GUN, I unleash a forceful discharge that sent Star Scream into indefinite babylon!!!!!
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Old 08-09-03, 09:21 PM   #2
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we gotta do a collab, u got msn messenger?
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Old 08-09-03, 09:23 PM   #3
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return da favour

maybe i can star on part 2 hey
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Old 08-09-03, 10:56 PM   #4
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That Made Like No Fucken Sense And Didn't Rhyme Or Flow Whatsoever.......
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Old 08-09-03, 11:09 PM   #5
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It switches from 3rd person ta 1st point of view...You got ta be a big boy ta understand this...

Uppn for more critism. If anyone needs some feedback, post you link here and I will leave feedback....
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Old 08-10-03, 03:02 PM   #6
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Old 08-11-03, 06:15 PM   #7
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uppin for the final time
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