yo this dropes wack i know.....im tryin some new techniques,but it seems that it always fucks up the flowin....let me know what u think.....but be aware of the flowing....!!


How did it take my time,rhymin,clmbin' the stages of crime//
tryin to get respect earned,my name heard,and tryin to earn a dyme//
got fines,bills for speakin my mind,all this shit was inflicted as im savin my behind//
i shouda listend to god,stuck to prayin and reading the holly signes//
or shouda kept my rod clean,wonderin if the dirty hoe was lying//
living pig stying,as im canonaded with hostile scenarios contenplating dying//
graffiti is an art,bad boying is a culture,emc'ing was the youngest,then what the fuck is a hustla//

You Were Tryin' To Add More Multi's In, I See...Played Well, try To Shorten Your Bars Though, Too Long...

Flow Was O.k, But Pretty Weak...

Keep Tryin' New Stuff Out....

yeah i know....its wack....but im not tryin to prove anything like my vocab or multie'ing or anything like that.....theres this way of internal multie'ing some kids have been talkin bout.....im jus tryin it out and maybe morphin it into internal multie rhymin....