10 lines
no d-r / hater votes
both spit same time

Ok then, well give me a min............................................... .................................................. ................................

I'm spittin these lyrical rhymes, theres no way gonna last,
your tryin to keep up, but i'm movin to fast.
some people call me, the lyracist king, a spectacular thing,
cos i'm here to bring, a new look to rapping.
I'm killin u with these lyrics, you hear it, thats the sound off you fallin to the ground,
while you tryin to get up, but i'm holdin you down.
Your just like the rest with your big rings and fat chains, your all the same,
but unlike you i stay true to the game, and never bring it to shame.
You don't understand my style, your just seein one big pile,
of words and phrases, bringin you down like rabies,
i'm keepin you to the floor,cos i'm real hardcore, watchin you bleed to death, while your seein red,
so try and get back to reality, get rid of this profanity, so that you can see clearly.
Your a young white boy, tryin to be black, i tried shaggin your mom last night but dawg, she to slack.
Your raps are unlyrical, unsinical, its only fair that you just lay down n let me walk all over you.
I'm gonna keep this one short so you betta come back quick,
cos i'm not gonna wait that long or you can suck my dick!

i've gotta go now but i will be back on tomorrow so hopefullly you will have spit your verse by then.............................................. .......

fuck me, how long does it take to write a verse............................................. .................................................. .....................

This is my first battle on here so and feedback on my verse will be appreciated....................................... .............................................

yo not a bad drop 4 your first time but i your multi's were ok flow was scrappy punches were there...some personals were added 2 try 2 keep off dissin mums its lame.....just lacked in word play really and quality of words........i will hit this up wen the other cat drops

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jus wat i was gonna say it was good 4 your 1st

keep it up n try to elevate

thanx for the info. Will try harder next time..................................and scotty c, when u gonna spit?

yo could every1 plz go n vote on dis

rico vs d mecca

scotty c, you betta not make this a no show.............................................. .................................................. .....

Yeah sure man, if he doesnt show 2moro i will 4 sure, but just let the guy be scared, your verse was gud 4 a newbie! I will vote on this shit 2moro!

yo, can everyone poll vote for me on this battle cos scotty c is a no show.............................................. .................................................. ..

yo you cant take the win off a no show i am sure every 1 will aggree...........................................

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