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Checkin In...

I'ma Drop 10-12 Lines...Match It...

Good Luck...
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checkin in, i'll drop later 2nite

mystik try to drop soon, so we can get our shit voted on homie

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tigger wouldn't even let u rap in ur city, matta fact store ur lyrics in tha basement//
ur skills below average, like ya age for ur grade placement//
taking ur self-esteem, eating ur verse alive like a group of lotus//
don't get cocky, you can't afford to let me wreck ur focus//
why look at the votes, this KO can be tallied by simple mathematics//
ur losses is like most gunz they alwayz come automatic//
you like a musilm, you don't want none of my verses like it was pork//
u should've titled ur verse cartoon because on the net it don't work//
metaphors leave u exposed like materialistic pointing out generic clothes//
even if u wrote ur shit on the freeway, ya punches still wouldn't take a toll//
if ya fall off ya bike, u might catch ur first break//
my punches startin to change ur heart like TV. shows setting up blind dates//
i just did a five minute freestyle and killed ya//
now throw back them wack azz lyrics, like old sports memobrilla!!!

12-14 LINEZ, U MATCH THAT SINCE I ALREADY SPIT MY SHIT

Aight...12-14 Lines...

Look At His Virgin Rhymes, I'm Quick 2 Rip This Pussy Coz I'm Horny
Ya Verse Is Premature, All I See Is Streched Marks...How Ya Wins Near 40
Your Still A Newbie, Battlin Herbs Is The Only Way You Get Your Victories
Your Weak Lyrically, The Fact That I Beat Youngblood Dont Mean Shit To Me
Damn You Should Have Dropped Thursday, You Needed The Time To PreWrite
You Talk Alot Of Shit And Act Like Yo Black...But The Fact Is He's White!
Ya Rhymes Tight? Your Wack To A New Degree, Let's Sharpen Up Ya Finger Joint
But Even If Ya Still Tried To Key A Dope Verse, Ya Flow Will Never Be On Point
Need To Perform Reconstructive Surgery On Ya Pen To Give Ya Verse A New Look
Ya Verse Off Da Hook? You Need To Go Out And By The Rhyming For Dummies Book
Aight I'll Give Ya A Hint, Put A Lid On My Verse So U Can Say Ya Topped It
Thats It, Ya Verse Was Amatuer Balls, Let Me Guess...You Still Aint Dropped It!
Youngblood Still Tha Unknown In This League, My Verse Left Ya Jaw On Tha Floor
I'm Done Wit You, Report 2 Court Coz Ya Rhymes Got Sued 4 Non-Support

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69105
For The 6th Line

*Edited For Spelling*

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haha...he woulda fooled me dat he wuznt black...lemme break it down..
Opener: Both werent bad but it seems like everyone uses premature...kinda played...Young got dat
Punches: Young
Flow: I liked some of Youngs, but overall MM's wuz betta
Personals: Not many but MM wit da white boy line
Creativity: I'd give dat ta Young cuz only a couple lines of MM'z wuz new...a lot played...no beef tho
Meta's: I def. liked dat metaphore line by Young...young got it
Multi's: Didnt really see any good enuff to point out but dats goin to MM
Closer/Finisher: I liked da flow of MM's but didnt really sound like a closer...YOUNG
Overall: I'm takin Young on dis one cuz his punches were hittin harder and, except for dat Muslim eatin pork line, he wuz more creative and original....
My Vote-YoungBlood...no beef...props to both for nice verses

For this battle I think that young blood had a pretty good opener, then he slacked off for the rest of the battle. I think MM got this one becuse the first 3-4 bars he spit were good personals and he continued through out the verse with better wordplay

^^im gonna have to agree wit cameron
on this one peeps...this was a tight battle
props to both
vote=Mystik Mind
peACE

hmmmm, close, tite battle..........but imma go wit young on dis 1....
his shit came harder and made a lil more sence, his punches were a heavy hitter and flows lyk a waterfall, da otha kat i still got props for......but.......he didnt come as hard as young, but tite battle...............

vote-youngblood

Vote MM

This wasnt that great of a battle... not many original punches.. Young's whole verse was played... MM made more of an effort & had some good attempts at punches... so vote mm

how you kids think youngblood won i dunno..
this wasnt even close.. young didnt even rhyme some of it..........................

vote- mm i cant poll, too bad . .

Damn this was some close ass shit
props to both of you
I thought Young had better punches overal
close shit tho
damn
shit was to close
but i gotta give it to young
no hate

vote-YoungBlood

this was a very good battle, youngblood might have edged u out wit the punches and werdplay mind....
no hate vote at all

vote=youngblood

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man, youngblood took this shit. his hits were stronger, and better multis. otha dude came aight, but youngbloods verse, overall, was better.